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A Book Report

When Magic Comes with a Price: A Review of "When You Wish Upon A Star" by Elizabeth Lim
Elizabeth Lim's "When You Wish Upon A Star" (2023) stands as a compelling addition to Disney's "A Twisted Tale" series, offering readers a fresh and darker perspective on the beloved Pinocchio story. Rather than simply retelling the classic tale, Lim asks a provocative question: "What if the Blue Fairy wasn't supposed to help Pinocchio?" This premise launches readers into a complex narrative that explores the consequences of defying cosmic order for the sake of compassion.
A Story Reimagined
Set in the atmospheric village of Pariva, the novel begins with the familiar wish that started it all—Geppetto's desperate plea for his wooden puppet to become a real boy. However, Lim immediately subverts expectations by revealing that the Blue Fairy's intervention was actually forbidden by fairy law. This act of rebellion sets in motion a chain of events that threatens not only Pinocchio's fate but the delicate balance between the fairy and human worlds.
The story unfolds forty years after an initial conflict between two fairy sisters. Chiara, who becomes the Blue Fairy, has spent decades in exile for her past transgressions. When she chooses to help Geppetto despite the rules, she's discovered by her sister Ilaria, the Scarlet Fairy, who harbors a deep-seated grudge. The sisters' decision to settle their differences through a supernatural bet transforms Pinocchio and Geppetto from simple beneficiaries of magic into pawns in a larger cosmic game.
Character Development and Relationships
Lim's greatest strength lies in her character development, particularly in the complex relationship between the fairy sisters. Chiara emerges as a sympathetic figure whose compassionate nature conflicts with her magical duties, while Ilaria represents the darker side of absolute rule-following and unresolved family trauma. Their sibling rivalry drives the narrative forward and provides emotional depth that elevates the story beyond a simple fairy tale retelling.
The familiar characters of Pinocchio, Geppetto, and even Jiminy Cricket are given new dimensions in this version. Pinocchio's journey to becoming a real boy is complicated by the knowledge that his very existence defies natural order, while Geppetto must grapple with the unintended consequences of his innocent wish.
Themes and Analysis
The novel explores several sophisticated themes that resonate with contemporary audiences. The central question of whether breaking unjust rules can be morally justified runs throughout the narrative. Chiara's defiance of fairy law to help humans parallels real-world situations where individuals must choose between following orders and doing what they believe is right.
Family dynamics and the lasting impact of unresolved conflicts form another major theme. The forty-year grudge between Chiara and Ilaria demonstrates how family wounds can fester when left unaddressed, affecting not only the individuals involved but innocent bystanders caught in their wake.
The concept of sacrifice also permeates the story. Characters must repeatedly choose between personal desires and greater good, with Lim skillfully showing how these choices ripple outward to affect entire communities.
Writing Style and World-Building
Lim demonstrates impressive skill in seamlessly integrating the fairy world with the human realm of Pariva. The village comes alive through atmospheric descriptions that ground the magical elements in a believable setting. Her writing style balances the whimsical nature of fairy tales with more mature themes, making the book accessible to both young adult and adult readers.
The pacing builds steadily from the initial setup through the climactic confrontation between the sisters, with Lim maintaining tension while allowing sufficient time for character development and world-building.
Critical Assessment
"When You Wish Upon A Star" succeeds as both a standalone novel and as part of the Twisted Tale series. Lim takes creative risks that pay off, particularly in her decision to focus on the fairies rather than just retelling Pinocchio's story. The moral complexity she introduces elevates the material beyond typical fairy tale adaptations.
Some readers might find the departure from the original Disney version jarring, but this is precisely what makes Lim's version compelling. She respects the source material while creating something entirely new and thought-provoking.
Conclusion
Elizabeth Lim's "When You Wish Upon A Star" transforms a familiar story into a meditation on family, duty, and the price of compassion. By shifting focus from the puppet's journey to the fairies who shape his fate, Lim creates a narrative that feels both nostalgic and completely fresh. The book succeeds in proving that even the most well-known stories can be reinvented when approached with creativity, respect for the source material, and a willingness to explore deeper themes.
This twisted tale reminds us that magic always comes with a price, and sometimes the most difficult wishes to grant are the ones that seem simplest on the surface. For readers seeking fairy tale retellings with substance and emotional depth, "When You Wish Upon A Star" delivers a story that will linger long after the final page is turned.
About the Creator
Parsley Rose
Just a small town girl, living in a dystopian wasteland, trying to survive the next big Feral Ghoul attack. I'm from a vault that ran questionable operations on sick and injured prewar to postnuclear apocalypse vault dwellers. I like stars.




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