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The Killer Mobile

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By Sudais ZakwanPublished about 5 hours ago 3 min read

“Kiran, wake up—it’s morning. You stay up all night talking on your phone and can’t wake up in the morning,” her sister Noor scolded. “I don’t understand what people talk about all night. It’s a waste of time.”

Annoyed, Kiran snapped back. The two sisters lived with their mother; their father had passed away. Kiran was carefree and reckless, believing mobile phones were just for fun—people fooled each other and killed time. Noor, in contrast, was disciplined and religious, praying five times a day. Their mother worked in other people’s houses to support the family. Noor constantly worried about Kiran and prayed for her safety.

Kiran teased Noor for being conservative and mocked her values. One day, she announced she would attend a friend’s birthday and stay the night. Noor objected firmly, warning her not to stay out overnight. Kiran reacted angrily, declaring it was her life and she would live it as she wished. Hurt but helpless, Noor finally stepped back, advising only this: the world is dangerous; protect your honor, because dignity, once lost, never returns. She prayed for Kiran and left the matter to God.

In truth, there was no birthday party. Kiran was secretly involved with Sameer, a spoiled, immoral rich boy. His pattern was simple: befriend innocent girls through mobile phones, charm them, exploit their trust, then disappear. That night, Kiran met Sameer at a five-star hotel. He greeted her lovingly, spoke sweet words, promised eternal love, and convinced her of his devotion. Blinded by affection and intoxicated by youth, Kiran ignored fear, faith, and consequences. Sameer fulfilled his desire and crushed her innocence.

The next morning, Kiran returned home ashamed, eyes lowered, her conscience tormenting her. Noor was angry on the surface but deeply loving inside. She asked gently how long this path would continue, reminding Kiran that their mother was ill and they had no one but each other. Noor then went to their mother, who lay critically ill and unable to speak, and wept, wishing she could guide Kiran.

Days passed. Sameer stopped answering calls; his number remained switched off. Such men vanish after the hunt. Weeks turned into months. Kiran grew anxious and sick. Soon the truth surfaced—she was pregnant. Noor’s marriage talks had begun, but she worried deeply for Kiran, knowing the harvest of Kiran’s choices had arrived. Kiran, ashamed and broken, now realized Noor had been right. She refused marriage, saying she hated men and begged Noor never to raise the topic again.

Time moved quickly. Kiran’s health deteriorated as her delivery approached. One day, her condition worsened suddenly, and she was rushed to the hospital. After examination, doctors told Noor the baby had died in the womb and immediate surgery was necessary. They could not guarantee Kiran’s survival.

Noor cried and prayed desperately. Seeing Noor weep, Kiran called her close and confessed, “This is the punishment for my mistake. I wish I had listened to you. You were right, and I hurt you deeply. Please forgive me. I don’t deserve to live.” Noor begged her not to speak that way and prayed for her life.

Consent papers were signed, and surgery began. Noor waited outside, trembling, praying endlessly. After some time, the doctor emerged with devastating news: they could not save Kiran.

Noor collapsed in grief, crying aloud, “If only you hadn’t made that mistake. Your mobile became your killer. If there had been no mobile, no deception, no sin—today you would still be alive.”

This story teaches us that unchecked freedom, blind trust, and misuse of technology can destroy lives. Mobile phones are tools, not toys for emotional manipulation. Listening to sincere advice, respecting boundaries, and valuing self-respect can protect us from irreversible loss. One careless decision can change an entire life, so wisdom lies in restraint, awareness, and moral courage.

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About the Creator

Sudais Zakwan

Sudais Zakwan – Storyteller of Emotions

Sudais Zakwan is a passionate story writer known for crafting emotionally rich and thought-provoking stories that resonate with readers of all ages. With a unique voice and creative flair.

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