The poems of a Prolific Persian writer and Sufi mystic, Rumi. With couplet poems, this man changed the world and influenced the Muslim religion. Rumi only wanted us to transcend our physical world and finally reunite with the Divine God, and his work is the stepping stone to do that.
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Pastor Jamal Bryant calls for the arrest of protestors who recently interrupted his church service
Churches on private property should be protected. No matter if it’s a white supremacist or a black supremacist. It’s about the right for the leader and parishioners to enjoy the service in peace.
By Skyler Saunders5 days ago in Critique
Field of the Fallen
Sunlight danced softly across the frost-crusted fields, making the little blades of grass sparkle like emeralds. The faraway chirrup of a songbird was the only disruption to the quiet of the morning. An icy chill, the last vestige of the dying winter, clung to the air, settling in a thick white mist at the far side of the open field. The heavy stench of decay hung in that mist, punctuation by the sharp tang of freshly spilled blood.
By A. J. Schoenfeld8 days ago in Fiction
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Absolutely fantastic critique! Love Rumi! Great choice!
I've heard of him but have not read any of his poems! I should check them out!
I'm interested in whether that stepping stone actually shifts the readers position?
Hi Jazzy, Heard of him but not the book! Intriguing !! ☺️ I really like how you have focused on the influences within the critique.
Excellent
Lovely critique!!! Loved this!!!
Ahh Rumi! Hard to believe I only discovered his writings in recent years. It’s art and wisdom and love… great critique and choice of subject ❤️👌✨
Wow! He sounds like someone I would appreciate.
Interesting critique
Love it, poems like a whirling dervish. Rumi is a great poet, and your critique does him and his aims justice!