Mount Rushmore
a critique.
Or as I like to call it Mount Rush-no-more.
Contents: Four dead presidents lording over the common folk.
An unwelcome reason to ignore Crazy Horse.
Boasts a claim of no one dying during construction. That is, if you don't care about long-lasting lung damage.
Not even that big.
Recommendation, skip.
About the Creator
Rachael MacDonald
Avid Reader, Sometimes Poet, Occasional Writer, and searcher of truths often lost in the breaths between candy-coated lies.
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
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Thank you, duly noted 😁 *crosses it off my list off destinations*
I like your quite scathing but compelling critique of a landmark most would consider visiting! Well done, also you have a new subscriber!
Lol, that was hilarious! Awesome work!