When We Were Very Young
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In another box set that my parents got me when I was younger contained four books by A.A. Milne. 'When We Were Very Young' is a collection of poems that Milne wrote for his son Christopher Robin. This is a book that is full of references to Mr. Edward Bear, but a lot of the poems give some various descriptions of life of a very young child and where, when, how and why they do what they do. The illustrations are quite cute for you can see what Christopher Robin is and may be thinking. Also, Pooh Bear does make his self-known at various points. I have read these verses many, many times over the years and each time make me feel good about myself.
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Mark Graham
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Beautifully written ā¤ļø
Congratulations on your story being a Top Story in May 2024!
Congratulations on TS! š„³ Nice story! Our mother read us over and over and over (I honestly don't know how she could do it!) Mister Dog: The Dog Who Belonged to Himself about Crispin's Crispian. Check it out!!
Aw they sound great!
Hey, congratulations for this amazing one!
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! šššššš
Pooh bear is a classic for a good reason Well said
Wow! It's amazing how a few words can take you back to childhood. Congrats on your TS, Mark!
I feel that this is the perfect collection for children!
You've sold me!šš