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In Love With a Stranger on the Train

A journey that began with a glance.

By Haris RaheemPublished 6 months ago 4 min read

It started on a Tuesday—ordinary, gray, unremarkable. The kind of morning when the sky forgets to rise with conviction and people shrink into their coats, blending into the city’s shuffle. Mia boarded the 7:45 a.m. commuter train from Willow Creek to downtown like she did every day, earbuds in, coffee in hand, mind already halfway through her to-do list.

But that morning, he was there.

She noticed him first by the book. People didn’t read paperbacks anymore, not in a city of screens and noise. But there he was, leaning against the window seat across from her, reading The Unbearable Lightness of Being. The title caught her eye. She’d read it in college, underlined the sentences that hurt, wrote one of them on her wall with a Sharpie. Something about lightness and weight, love and chance.

He had dark hair that curled at the edges, a gray scarf looped carelessly around his neck, and a face that was more expressive in rest than most were in motion. He didn’t glance up once, not even when the train jolted. His world, it seemed, existed entirely between those pages.

Mia tried not to stare. But trains are confined spaces, and curiosity doesn’t ask for permission. She shifted slightly to get a better look—just a glimpse—and he looked up at that exact moment.

Their eyes met.

And he smiled.

It wasn’t wide or flirtatious. Just... honest. Quick. But it unraveled something in her, a thread she didn’t know was loose. She looked away, suddenly very aware of the fingerprints on her coffee lid and the static in her hair.

The next morning, he was there again. Same car. Different book—this time, Norwegian Wood. He nodded at her when she walked in. She nodded back. That was it. But the air between them had changed. Charged, like static right before a storm.

Over the next few days, they fell into a silent rhythm.

She would take the seat across from him, always. He’d be reading. She’d pretend to scroll her phone, but sneak glances. They exchanged smiles, a few words one morning when the train stalled for five minutes near Bellview Station.

He asked, “Do you think we’re stuck in some metaphor?”

She laughed. “Probably. Something Kafka would’ve written.”

He grinned. “Or Camus. We’re all just passengers in a meaningless system.”

Their words hung in the air, weightless and electric.

They never exchanged names.

It was strange how much you could feel for someone without a single proper introduction. But with each shared ride, she felt herself knowing him more—the way he rubbed his temple when the train screeched around turns, how he pressed his thumb against the book’s spine, or how he always looked out the window with a softness that didn’t match the city’s hard edges.

She told herself not to romanticize it. People on trains were fleeting. Ghosts in transit. They arrived and disappeared, leaving behind forgotten gloves and fragments of memory.

But still, she looked for him every morning.

And he was always there.

Until he wasn’t.

That Friday, she stepped into the car, scanning the rows automatically. Empty. His seat—vacant. She sat down anyway, absurdly disappointed. Maybe he missed it. Maybe he took a different train. Maybe it meant nothing to him.

Saturday and Sunday stretched long and restless. She replayed every moment, every smile, trying to find meaning in the silences. It was ridiculous. She didn’t even know his name. But her chest ached like someone had pulled a book from her hands mid-sentence.

On Monday, he was back.

This time, he sat beside her.

“Hey,” he said softly. “Sorry I missed Friday.”

She turned to him, startled by the sound of his voice so close.

“It’s okay,” she replied, too quickly.

“I was in Boston. Interview.”

“For a job?”

“Yeah. Editorial role. Books, mostly.”

Of course, she thought. Books. She smiled. “Did it go well?”

“I think so. But I realized something while I was gone.” He hesitated, looking down at his hands. “I missed this.”

She blinked. “The train?”

He laughed, shaking his head. “You.”

Silence stretched between them like a held breath.

“I know this is strange,” he continued. “We barely know each other. But I look forward to this every morning. It’s the best part of my day.”

Her heart thudded, wild and confused.

“You don’t even know my name,” she whispered.

“Then let me fix that.” He extended a hand. “Daniel.”

She stared at it for a beat before taking it. “Mia.”

His grip was warm and sure. A grounding wire.

They sat in silence after that, both smiling, both a little stunned. But their hands stayed close—too close to be accidental. And when the train slowed at the downtown terminal, neither of them moved to stand. Not yet.

The crowd rushed past them, unaware that something extraordinary had happened in seat 14B.

That morning, love hadn’t arrived like thunder. It had crept in quietly, as soft as the turn of a page, the pause between heartbeats, the breath before a first kiss.

And in a world full of strangers, Mia realized some meetings weren’t coincidences.

Some strangers were meant to be found—on gray mornings, on crowded trains, in the quiet spaces between destinations.

AdventureClassicalExcerptFan FictionFantasyHistoricalLoveMicrofictionMysteryPsychologicalShort StoryYoung Adult

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