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Adrian pops in for a quick after-work drink and gets more than friendly with a workmate

By Raymond G. TaylorPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
Bar in 20 Fenchurch Street, licensed: D.S. Pugh

Early evening at the Bar Paradiso, after work. Adrian knew his luck was in when the blond bombshell approached him. He recognized her from the office.

“You’re Kara, aren’t you?” She smiled, nodding. Within half an hour they were making love in a quiet hotel nearby.

Later that evening, Brandon sat in rapt conversation with a stunning woman he just met at the Paradiso.

“I know a great hotel for a quiet drink nearby,” said Kara.

As Chuck sipped a late-night Manhattan, on a stool at the bar Paradiso, a woman sat next to him.

“Hi, my name is Kara.”

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This drabble (a story in exactly 100 words) was inspired by a case study I read some years ago in a book about different aspects of psychopathy. The anonymised subject was a married woman whose husband was initially oblivious to her infidelity. She boasted to their friends that she had on one occasion had sex with two different men within an hour, neither of them being aware of the other. I hope this story also challenges some male assumptions about women.

AI, psychopathy and success

Part of my ongoing research into use of artificial intelligence for writers, this is an article about psychopaths who are not violent offenders, written with my AI buddy's assistance.

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Raymond G. Taylor

Author living in Kent, England. Writer of short stories and poems in a wide range of genres, forms and styles. A non-fiction writer for 40+ years. Subjects include art, history, science, business, law, and the human condition.

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock9 months ago

    How do I know this a surfer story? Because "Kara-bundled-dudes!"

  • Raymond, I find Kara intriguing. Of course, in real life, I would hope to stay far away from a "Kara." 😅

  • Lol, Kara! Like Lamar said, she's very energetic! I love how that article inspired you. Very interesting!

  • Mark Graham3 years ago

    It might be 'drabble' but these kind of scenes are in a lot of novels and some are good for laughs or maybe some other kind of emotion.

  • Lamar Wiggins3 years ago

    Well, she’s quite the energetic one, lol.

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