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The Fog (1)

Dystopia through the keyhole.

By Antoni De'LeonPublished 3 months ago Updated 3 months ago 6 min read
The Fog (1)
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It has been five revolutions of the calendar since my lone existence underground in this impenetrable tomb of a bunker.

Hands trembling, and with great difficulty, I pry open the large rectangular keyhole/peephole in the great steel door guarding the life saving shelter. I see nothing but mist and still-life shapes.

It is time for emergence.

The metallic creak of the bunker door echoed through the desolate silence as Rhaan cautiously pushed it open. Dust motes danced in the slivers of light that pierced the darkness, revealing a landscape irrevocably changed. The year was 2050, and the world as he had once known it was no more. Rhaan took a deep breath, his heart pounding with a mix of fear, trepidation and determination

Everything around me is pale beige of eerie quiet. Is it mist, smoke. I try not to inhale deeply, but the air smells strangely like jasmine on a warm summer's day, heady, musky, yet slightly fruity and oddly welcome.

Am I truly alone. I am conflicted on whether or not that is a good thing. Would the world restart with just me. How would that work. All these questions and more resonate into an uncertain void as I forge into the unknown.

I begin to walk towards I know not what. Whatever is out there, or not out there. I must face it head on, begin anew.

I remember when they said take shelter as best we could, for the world was ending...again. We had heard it so many times before, we had become inured and nonchalant. This time it had been for real, we were not prepared - I am still not quite sure of what had actually happened.

There had been a terrible silence...every sound just frozen...It was a prelude to the end of existence...as fiery death had rained down upon humanity.

The Desolation

At first Rhaan wondered why everything had disappeared, he could see nothing beyond the fog. Panic gripped his entire being, how was he to survive if truly there were only a blank nothingness. The white-beige blanket enveloping the world before him seemed endless and frightening. His store of food had been depleted, Rhaan hoped and prayed that somehow, somewhere, there was food and water to be found.

Suddenly, he sensed a change in the air, a metallic scent filled his nostril as the grey blanket of the atmosphere seemed to be slowly pulling itself apart.

He stepped out into a landscape that seemed ripped from the pages of a dystopian novel. Skyscrapers lay in ruins, their skeletal remains jutting into the sky like broken teeth. The streets, once teeming with life, were now eerily silent, overrun by nature reclaiming its territory. Overgrown trees with branches embracing the broken shells of buildings, seemed to mock him as they claimed what was once the pride and joy of humanity. The air carried the heavy, metallic scent, a grim reminder of the devastation that had unfolded while he hid beneath it all.

The Struggle

With no signs of other survivors, Rhaan's immediate concern was finding sustenance. He searched for supermarkets and stores, but those he found had long been picked clean, leaving him to scavenge through the rubble for anything of use. Five years, he mused, it's been a long time, food would have long been claimed or rotted, unless by some miracle he found a refrigerator that still worked.

He learned to forage, identifying edible plants and trapping small game that miraculously still survived.. His days were a relentless search for food and water, his nights spent in the safety of the bunker, haunted by the memories of what once was.

The Dangers

Survival in this new world came with its own set of dangers. Bands of scavengers may still roam the ruins, willing to kill for a can of beans. Rhaan had to be constantly vigilant, his senses heightened to detect the slightest hint of danger. He fashioned weapons from scraps, a makeshift spear and a solitary small gun his constant companion. Every encounter would be a test of his survival instinct, a fight for his life.

The Loneliness

Perhaps the greatest challenge was the crushing loneliness. Rhaan had lost his family in the first attacks . He had felt the loss to his core, made even more heartbreaking by the aloneness and silence. But he had learned and adapted.

Time spent by himself in the bunker had made him desperate for company. The hopes of finding allies which he had yearned for during his lone sojourn were being bitterly diminished with each passing day. The silence was deafening, a constant reminder of his isolation. He would often find himself talking to the wind, his voice an echoed whisper in the emptiness. He scrawled messages on the walls, hoping that one day, another survivor might stumble upon them. The prospect of enduring this existence alone was a weight that threatened to break his spirit.

Rhaan resolved to find a glimmer of hope amidst the despair. He discovered an old radio in the ruins of a government building. It crackled to life one evening, a faint signal reaching out across the void. "This is Base Echo, calling any survivors. We are alive." The voice was weak but unmistakable...a sign that he was not alone. He tried to radio back, but the static made communication impossible. He had barely managed to get directions as the broadcast repeated hourly.

The Journey

Fueled by this revelation, Rhaan knew that he must now journey forth, braving danger. He began to prepare for every possibility as he set out on a new mission. Preparations were made to brave the remnants of civilization, navigate treacherous landscapes and evade hostile encounters if he were to survive. His journey would be fraught with peril, but hopefully, each step would bring him closer to his goal. The thought of finding others, of rebuilding a semblance of society, kept him moving forward. Rhaan packed what little food and water he had, bid the bunker goodbye with gratitude for keeping him alive all these years, and began his journey into the unknown.

Trials

Danger first presented itself in the form of a pack of wild dogs foraging for food in the sweltering afternoon. Scavenging for food himself near the remnants of an old town, Rhaan heard the menacing growls of the pack. These animals, once domesticated, had become feral in the wake of civilization's collapse. Their eyes gleamed with hunger as they approached and begun to encircle him.

Rhaan knew he couldn't outrun them, so he quickly climbed atop a rusting car, using his spear to fend off their snapping jaws. He managed to strike a few, injuring them enough to cause the pack to hesitate, and retreat a small distance. Taking advantage of the momentary reprieve, Rhaan spotted a nearby building with an open window. With all his strength, he leaped off the car and scrambled through the window, narrowly escaping the dogs' pursuit. He barricaded himself inside a tiny room and waited until the dogs finally grew tired of attempting to knock the door down, heaving their scrawny bodies against the door. After a long while, the snarling finally faded into the distance. He waited for a short time, then made his way outside. All was again quiet.

The Scavenger Ambush

One evening, as the sun dipped below the horizon, Rhaan stumbled upon an abandoned supermarket. Delighted by the prospect of finding supplies, he cautiously entered, unaware that a group of scavengers had set up an ambush inside.

He had barely started his search, when suddenly, the shelves toppled, and masked figures emerged, brandishing makeshift weapons. Rhaan's survival instincts kicked in. He quickly produced his pistol, pointing it from one to the other as he grabbed a heavy metal bar from the debris and fought back, relentless, determined. The confined space worked to his advantage, as he managed to keep two of them at bay. Just as a third lunged at him, he knocked over a stack of cans, creating a loud crash that startled the assailants long enough for Rhaan to escape out the door. He ran like the devil was on his trail, firing a warning shot in their direction.

The pack of human wolves continued on his trail, he could not see them, but he knew they were somewhere close behind.

Part 2

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About the Creator

Antoni De'Leon

Everything has its wonders, even darkness and silence, and I learn, whatever state I may be in, therein to be content. (Helen Keller).

Tiffany, Dhar, JBaz, Rommie, Grz, Paul, Mike, Sid, NA, Michelle L, Caitlin, Sarah P. List unfinished.

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  • Jamye Sharp3 months ago

    Its certainly a good start. Rhaan is a bit lacking in personality though. I want to feel for and identify with him, but there isn't much to go on just yet. Also, why do the wolves give up so easily? If they are starving and willing to bring down a human, I'd like to know more about their looks, the hunger madness, and see more of a challenge to get away.

  • Novel Allen3 months ago

    I think we are working hard for this to happen soon. Just look at all that is going on, world is warming up, people going crazy. Truth not far off.

  • Lol, maybe Rhaan would have liked it to be dead like the others rather than being in this situation. Looking forward to part 2!

  • Mark Graham3 months ago

    In the year 2050 I will be in my late 80's I hope your story does not really happen. What a great start to a futuristic science fiction story. Hope you are working on Part 2. Great job.

  • Mariann Carroll3 months ago

    You did a great job. I like how you end it with a great escape like a true hero of the story 🥰

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