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The Sip That Stopped Time

Where a Glass of Mango Shake Held Memories, Silence, and Peace

By Taslim UllahPublished 8 months ago 4 min read

In a sleepy corner of the old city, where the streets still whispered the songs of simpler days and the air was thick with the scent of clay, spice, and fading sunlight, sat a man who didn’t seem to belong to the race of the world anymore.

The tea shop wasn’t much to look at. Its walls, once proudly painted a vibrant mustard yellow, had now been softened by time, cracked and peeled in places like skin after a long sunburn. The plastic chairs — all a blaring red — stood in contrast to everything else around them, as if stubbornly holding on to youth in a place that had long accepted age. Yet, amid all this quiet decay, the shop thrived, not because of what it offered, but because of who sat there.

Hamza wasn’t old, but there was something timeless about him. In his mid-thirties, with a thick black beard, calm brown eyes, and a gentle presence, he carried the air of someone who had seen both beauty and bitterness — and learned to sit with both. Every day, around the same hour, he would walk to the shop and claim the same seat, always the third red chair from the left, leaning back gently against the rough wall.

In his hand was always the same glass — a thick, frosty mug filled to the brim with mango shake, topped with a thin layer of foam that danced each time he gently moved it. He never rushed. Each sip was a pause, a conversation with memory.

There were rumors about him, of course. In places like this, a man who says little says too much without knowing it. Some said he was a writer who had lost his words. Others claimed he was a teacher who had lost his classroom in a fire. A few whispered he had once been in love, deeply, irrevocably, until life or war or fate pulled her away. The truth? No one truly knew. And Hamza never offered to clarify.

Children who passed by often giggled, wondering why a grown man drank something they considered a treat. But sometimes, when their mothers weren't looking, he would offer them the last sip of his shake, with a wink and a smile that spoke more than any bedtime story. To the children, he was a kind mystery. To the elders, he was a living proverb — calm, patient, deliberate.

The shopkeeper, Fida, knew Hamza more than most. Not through words, but through presence. He’d been serving Hamza that mango shake for five years. Without asking. Without change. Just a nod from Hamza was enough.

“I don’t know what it is,” Fida once said to a customer. “When he drinks it, it’s like the world stops spinning, just for a moment. Makes you wonder what he’s thinking about.”

But Hamza didn’t think much anymore. At least, not in the way others did — with noise and rush and conclusions. His thoughts were slower now, like ink in cold water. He remembered the days of ambition, of running after dreams and ideas, lectures and crowded rooms. He remembered standing in front of a blackboard, chalk dust on his hands, young minds waiting for answers he sometimes didn’t have.

He remembered Mariam.

She had been the brightest light in a room that rarely lit up. Not just because she asked questions, but because she lived them. She had a mind that moved faster than her pen, and eyes that softened even the hardest truths. Hamza had been her teacher for a year. That was all. But in that time, a quiet understanding had bloomed between them — respectful, tender, and deeply human.

But life doesn’t always honor the quietest stories. When Mariam’s family moved away, Hamza didn’t protest. He couldn’t. He was just the teacher. Not the lover. Not the keeper. Just a footnote in the chapter of her youth.

Years passed. He taught more students. Wrote less. Spoke less. And one day, without any dramatic event, he left. He walked out of the school, turned the corner, and never returned.

What he found instead was stillness.

The tea shop became his retreat. The mango shake, his one indulgence. It reminded him of her — not because she loved mangoes, but because she once joked that it tasted like bottled sunshine. “You could drink this on the saddest day and still find a reason to smile,” she had said.

Hamza didn’t know if she remembered that. He didn’t know if she even remembered him. But he remembered. And so, he returned to the shop every day, not out of grief, but out of quiet honor for a time that once made him feel alive.

It was during one of those afternoons — thick with heat, the fans whirring overhead, the shop half-empty — that a stranger came in. She wore a light scarf and glasses, and carried a child at her side. She looked at Hamza briefly, then looked away. Ordered tea. Sat down.

Hamza didn’t notice. Not at first. But the child — a girl, no older than six — kept looking at him.

“You look like my teacher,” she said, walking up to him. “Except you’re not in a school.”

Hamza smiled gently. “Maybe I used to be.”

“What do you teach now?”

He paused. Took a sip of his mango shake. “I teach people how to be quiet.”

The girl giggled. “That’s funny.”

Her mother called her back. But before she turned, she looked at Hamza once more and said, “You remind my mama of someone. She says you look like a person she once knew.”

Hamza’s hand froze. He turned, slowly, toward the woman.

Their eyes met.

It was brief. A breath, maybe two.

Recognition — the kind that needs no words.

But she didn’t speak. Neither did he.

She smiled, placed her hand on her daughter’s shoulder, and nodded — not a hello, not a goodbye, just a gesture that said, “I see you.”

Then she left.

Hamza looked down at his glass. The foam had settled. The mango was still cold. He took another sip. And this time, he tasted more than sunshine.

He tasted peace.

Love

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Taslim Ullah

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  • Belt Markku8 months ago

    This description of the tea shop and Hamza is really vivid. It makes me picture that place clearly. I wonder what made Hamza choose that specific chair every day. And those rumors about him are intriguing. Do you think any of them could be true, or is he just an enigma on purpose?

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