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Playtime

for Vocal's Spooky Micro-Challenge

By ROCK aka Andrea Polla (Simmons)Published about a year ago 1 min read
Playtime
Photo by Krzysztof Kowalik on Unsplash

There was only one rule: don't open the door. - Lily, the new nanny, unlike Kay, was laid back, laughed easily as Jon caught her eye playfully.

Kay was over protective of their Korean born daughter, June; their dream child after decades of trying to conceive. Lily noted the hesitancy in her voice when hired.

- We've never left her, that is for the weekend. As you read on the contract, no milk, no television and absolutely never open the door to the guest room.-

Lily bit her lip with a forced smile, waving sweetly as the forty-something couple, drove off in their silver Saab coupe´ for a romantic getaway in Boston.

Kay tried to relax, to be present for Jon as they pulled onto the highway: rubbing his thigh closest to her she eyed the speedometer.

- Jon, you must think for June now, slow down babe. Please-

Jon put on the brakes, dreading two nights of trying to pretend things were blissful.

- I gotta piss -

Jon exited at the familiar sight of golden arches, parked, then darted inside for relief.

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Kay couldn't help herself, speed-dialing home.

- Hi Lily, it's Kay. How's June? - why wouldn't the nanny pick up? She checked her watch, realizing it was quite late.

Kay felt dizzy. - Wait, where's Jon? A quick piss? What time is it? -

Kay woke to a knock on the car window. A security guard?

- Ma'am, you can't sleep here. Sorry.-

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Kay searched for Jon to no avail; groggy she drove home alone.

Inside she found June fast asleep, kissing her cheek she grimaced.

- Not again, Jon?- She approached the guest room door which was ajar.

-Damn!-

The nanny lie dead, Jon naked at her feet.

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About the Creator

ROCK aka Andrea Polla (Simmons)

~ American feminist living in Sweden ~ SHE/HER

Admin. Vocal Social Society

Find me: ‪@andreapolla63.bsky.social‬

FB: https://www.facebook.com/susanandreasimmonspolla

ST: https://rock63.substack.com/

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  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    Whoa! Nightmare hubby! A great take, Andrea!!

  • Kageno Hoshinoabout a year ago

    Nice story

  • Whoa whoa whoa, what the actual hell happened?! This was so fast paced and suspenseful!

  • Henrik Hagelandabout a year ago

    Great story Andrea, really horror scenario with such a hubby...

  • Tina D'Angeloabout a year ago

    That was a shot right out of the blue!!!

  • Raphael Fontenelleabout a year ago

    What in the heck...D= Awesome job btw.

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    Dream husband that!! Yikes! This was definitely a horror story! Great stuff.

  • Testabout a year ago

    well done

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Oh, that's creepy. I don't know what's up with Jon, but I don't like him.

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    A true Halloween story 🎃

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