It was the most perfect escape. Eddie had dreamed of this day after feeling like he was slaving away at a desk job he hated. Every day seemed bleak. He went to work and punched in figures onto a computer for eight hours. He would then come home to his boring wife and tend to his eight year old son. Eddie had never got an education because as a high school kid he had to drop out as he impregnated his crush. He pursued the girl who decided she did not want to be with him. He was forced to take on the role of dad to the kid as his parents forced him to. He married a woman from church to supplement his income.
He had finally secured a vacation with a beautiful lady. She had messaged him many times at his workplace. It was odd really. He had been dozing off and would hear her sweet seductive voice. How did she know his name? Eh, who cared! She was in front of him on this rowboat on a calm enchanting lake.
The truth is Eddie had been cheating on his wife multiple times. It was mainly just physical satisfaction. The women were not really attractive, but promiscuous which satisfied him. Right now he was practically dozing off thinking of how he was undressing this beautiful girl in front of him.
"Let's get naughty!."
Eddie jerked his head. The voice seemed to have come from inside his head. He looked up at his date who was smiling at him. He realized the rowboat had stopped and moved the oars, not fast, but enough to move the boat.
The lady lurched forward to Eddie and kissed him. It was unlike anything he had ever felt. It was full of passion. She asked if Eddie wanted to go all the way to which he started to strip his shirt off. The woman, whose name he did not even know, did a sort of strip tease in front of him. She lowered his trunks and proceeded to place his appendage in her mouth.
Eddie moaned gleefully. He wished this experience would never end. The woman looked up at Eddie and demanded he give it to her. They made love on the boat on the lake.
When they were finished They got dressed. Eddie continued to row the boat. For a bit no words were exchanged. Finally Eddie spoke.
"I wish I had a memento that nobody else could know about."
The woman smiled and stated that there would be indeed a memento. Eddie freaked out suddenly. He had not used protection, did she mean he would father another child? It was as though this woman could read his thoughts.
"Eddie, your seed will be with me until I transfer it to where it needs to be," she said.
Eddie opened his mouth to speak but no words came out. He was shocked. What could she mean?
As though like in some horror film the woman started to change form n front of his eyes. Her face looked twisted, her teeth were now fangs and her body was warped.
"Eddie, I am not a woman. I am a Succubus. Your semen has got me stronger. I will feed it to the Incubus and we will reproduce that way. Look into these waters! They are no longer peaceful. I have been watching you. You chose a life of lechery. I only pray on weak men like you. Now suffer eternity in the depths of hell."
She pushed him off the boat, her strength far more than twenty men.
About the Creator
Sid Aaron Hirji
Canadian born man who finds literature and science equally fascinating. Trauma bleeds through generations, words heal the hidden scars.
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Comments (4)
Poor fella, his unhappy life is now seabound. Incubus? Never knew the difference till now. Thanks.
This was... weird! In the best way!
Hahahahahahahah serves Eddie right!! Loved your story so much!
Ouch Sid! The devil is always in the details...there are many succubus', most don't have fangs. One unhappy-dead, drowning guy later.