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The Narrative Nexus 6: The Haunted House

A haunted loft, cursed by anguished souls and a malevolent monster, traps a man in eternal darkness. Struggling to escape, he confronts his doom as reality unravels and he is swallowed by oblivion.

By ShrevPublished about a year ago 2 min read

Shadows, like malevolent phantoms, writhed around the dilapidated hut, their dark forms contorting in the eerie glow of the moon. Each thunderous boom rattled the foundation of the earth, a symphony of terror that kept even the bravest souls cowering in their beds. A bolt of lightning, searing and blinding, struck dangerously close, its deafening crackle sending gargantuan shockwaves through my quivering body. Before me loomed the haunted loft, a spectre of dread that had tormented generations with its sinister presence. I could smell the malodorous scent of death whipping through the vigorous wind.

With every step towards the decrepit wooden door, it felt as though the ‘Sword of Damocles’ was suspended perilously above, threatening to cleave me asunder. An aroma of fear and trepidation enveloped my very being as I navigated the labyrinthine corridors, each step accompanied by the skittering of unseen vermin. The walls of the loft seemed to exhale, as though drawing breath in anticipation of some dark and terrible fate.

I could hear my pulse and heart palpitating in the suffocating silence and chilling fear of an impromptu death. And then, a piercing scream shattered the stillness, echoing through the desolate halls like a banshee’s wail, sending icy tendrils of dread coiling around my soul.

With trembling hands, I searched the room where the sound had originated, my senses assaulted by the surfeit of cobwebs and decay. But there was nothing, except for a shattered window and tattered curtains billowing in the ominous gale. An acute chill gripped my very being as I realised the truth: the screams were not of this world. They were the anguished cries of the death souls, echoing from some unfathomable abyss beyond the veil of reality.

Even after this realisation, a small thought lingered in my mind. There must be something torturing the souls if they were to scream. Out of the blue, the room erupted in a shower of glass and debris, the air thick with malevolence as the unseen presence made itself known.

Panic clawed at my chest as I put two and two together: there was not only a ghost, but a monster, daunting the feeble dead bodies. With a surge of adrenaline, I made a run for the door, only to find myself ensnared by an invisible barrier, my desperate blows repelled by some unseen force. As I faced death, I finally heard the voices of the lost souls.

“You cannot escape,” they whispered, their voices like the cold breath of the grave, “You are ours now, forever bound to this accursed place.”

My heart was pounding against my chest. The monster was invincible and omnipotent, and it always will be. Suddenly, a chilling cackle echoed through the darkness, a sound devoid of mercy or remorse. It was the monster.

With a sickening lurch, the fabric of reality seemed to unravel, plunging me into an abyss of darkness from which there could be no escape. In that moment, eternal oblivion swallowed me whole. A plethora of words swirled through my mind like a vivid vortex. Abyss. Nothingness. Void. Darkness. Doom. Death.

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About the Creator

Shrev

I am Shrev, a 13-year-old writing and maths enthusiast. I publish stories here on vocal.media.

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