The Portal, Part 2
Yellow Moon Nexus

Vocal Family ~ Below is Part 2 of The Portal: Yellow Moon Nexus. Part 1 can be found at https://todaysurvey.today/horror/the-portal-toco06n0.%3C/em%3E%3C/a%3E%3Cem class="css-ak7tmt-Italic">
The last passages contain Latin. Please forgive any language errors.
I hope that you enjoy my supernatural world of horror.
Part 2
Jack never stopped thinking about Asha. Baby girl, are you alive?
“So, exiled angel,” the demon growled, “I thought you didn’t give a damn about people anymore.”

Jack grinned, knowing he struck a nerve. “What went wrong, demon? Did you get tired of hell?”
Barrouck’s anger flared up a notch. He returned Jack’s grin with truths he knew would wound.
Demon and angel circled each other, Barrouck’s gray wings and Jack’s red riding thermal tides.
“Jackie, boy, how’s your wife in the Afterlife?”
Swiftly, Jack’s thoughts turned to finding his niece. God, please, let Asha still be alive. I know…
His prayer halted. Pain stabbed the angel.
The Allies lifted their voices.



Jack’s glorious red wings started to unfold. They were magnificent!
About the Creator
D. ALEXANDRA PORTER
Force of Nature



Comments (13)
Off. to read Part 1. LOL
Love it. HUGS
well done
D., just missing your wise and welcomed friendship and fabulous stories. Hope you are well and there are more stories coming. I took a break from Vocal, too, but wander back here and there!!! Let me know you are doing OK or if you want to talk!!
That was a wonderful piece of writing.
🍂🎃🍂 Lamar, My Storytelling Partner Extraordinare: Thank you for joining my journey of heroes and monsters in time for All Hallows Eve. I had an icing on the cake moment when I read that you appreciated my time-consuming image creations, too. Many Thanks, My Friend! 💜👻💜
👏👏👏 what an exciting adventure. I love dark lords and monsters. And it's about that time of year to start celebrating All Hallows Eve. Your character's images are beautiful and intriguing. Excellent stuff as always, my friend! 💖😍👻
I am so impressed that you pumped out part two so fast. This is really good D! The battle feels like the start of a war. Keep going with it! Sorry I was delayed reading, life has pulled me away and I knew that this would be good so I wanted to give it my full attention. Worth it!
I am confused, how would we non Latin speaking peeps know if your Latin is not correct my dear ma'am. 😍😏😃. I am so enjoying this story. So Gabriel is still around, that lovely fallen angel. Wonder how many more are here. Suss them out, please. You have obviously graduated top of the AI creation class. Wow! Oh, I love demons bursting into flames. Looking forward with bated breath for more demon flames. So great.
Oh I'm so glad Jack is okay and that Barrouck is gone! I'm really enjoying this story so much! Can't wait for the next part!
Definitely needs a to be continued at the end of this story. Great work!
Beautiful! I like the Latin phases I wondered before if we could mix languages in here so You did :) ! I just read the part 1 yesterday and today already second I feel happy You arrived with it so fast Thank You for sharing! Normally I am not easy with horrors but there is so much in there that I am just diving in Enjoyed!
Really wonderful, D! It is so hard to mix a battle scene with dialog and introspection and building context and history for the story... and you did it so well. An excellent Part 2!! 💙Anneliese