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The Nation That Could Have Been

A Story of Missed Chances and Forgotten Duties

By Raza UllahPublished 7 months ago 3 min read

In the heart of a once-great land, where rivers flowed with life and mountains stood like ancient guardians, lived a people blessed with every resource — gold beneath the ground, fertile soil, young minds, and old wisdom. The nation had brave ancestors, rich history, and endless potential. But year after year, decade after decade, they watched their dreams fade like morning mist.

This is the story of why they failed to make their nation great.

At first, there was hope. After independence, the people were filled with energy and vision. They dreamed of building schools, industries, clean cities, and a society where everyone mattered. But slowly, cracks began to show.

The first crack was blame.

Whenever something went wrong, fingers pointed in every direction but inward. When the economy fell, they blamed the leaders. When roads broke, they blamed the government. When exams were failed, they blamed the system. No one asked, What can I do to fix it?

The second crack was division.

Instead of uniting as one, the people divided — by language, by province, by religion, by class. They fought over small things while bigger issues were ignored. A farmer in the south didn’t care about a student in the north. A city dweller saw a village as backward. Politicians used these divisions like weapons.

In a small town, a boy named Fahad asked his grandfather one day, “Why is our country not like the ones we see on TV? Why are their streets clean? Why are their schools better?”

The old man sighed. “Because son, they chose discipline over excuses. Honesty over shortcuts. Work over words.”

Fahad didn’t understand at first. But as he grew, he began to see it all around him.

At school, students cheated in exams, and teachers looked the other way. At the hospital, the poor waited for hours while the rich were taken in instantly. On the roads, people broke rules proudly — traffic lights were seen as suggestions, not laws.

The third crack was corruption.

Leaders promised the stars but delivered stones. Money meant for schools was spent on personal mansions. Projects were announced with fanfare but never completed. Bribes became normal — to get a job, to get a license, even to get justice.

In the cities, young men and women with degrees searched for jobs that didn’t exist. Many gave up and left the country. Some turned to crime. Others just waited — waited for a miracle that never came.

The fourth crack was neglect of education.

While the world moved forward with science and technology, this nation stayed behind. Books were outdated. Teachers were underpaid. Students memorized instead of understanding. Libraries turned into storage rooms. Creativity and questions were discouraged.

Fahad, now a teacher himself, tried to change things. In his small classroom, he taught his students to think, to ask questions, to imagine a better nation. But he was one man. And the system was like a stone wall.

One day, he stood before his class and said, “We fail to make our nation great not because we can’t — but because we don’t. We wait for others to fix what we are breaking every day.”

A girl raised her hand. “Then what can we do, sir?”

He smiled sadly. “Start with yourself. Be honest. Be fair. Be kind. Respect rules. Protect your country’s name like it’s your own. One small good action can inspire others.”

Outside his classroom, the same old stories continued. Power cuts, price hikes, unfair treatment, and hopelessness.

But inside, something had changed.

Those children listened. Some grew up to be honest officers. Some became teachers. Some became social workers. They fought the cracks — slowly, painfully, but with courage.

And yet, until the day the nation learns to replace blame with responsibility, division with unity, corruption with justice, and ignorance with knowledge — it will remain a shadow of what it could have been.

Fahad, now an old man like his grandfather once was, watched the news one evening. It was the same: chaos in politics, anger in the streets, and more promises.

But as he turned off the TV, he heard his grandson in the other room helping a poor boy with homework.

A small smile returned to his face.

Maybe — just maybe — the future still had a chance.

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About the Creator

Raza Ullah

Raza Ullah writes heartfelt stories about family, education, history, and human values. His work reflects real-life struggles, love, and culture—aiming to inspire, teach, and connect people through meaningful storytelling.

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  • Raza Ullah (Author)7 months ago

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