A Handful Of Stars
Aiming High, And Getting There
This is for a friend who is aiming high.
It is a Pantoum
The music is "Don't Look Back" by Boston, when you are moving forward you don't look back.
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The Past Is Gone, Your Lessons Learned
Looking Forward, Treasures Abound
Aiming For Heaven, Path Is Turned
A Handful Of Stars, You Shall Astound
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Looking Forward, Treasures Abound
A Rainbow's Gold, Is Your Success
A Handful Of Stars, You Shall Astound
Climb That Mountain, You Will Impress
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A Rainbow's Gold, Is Your Success
Flying Colours, Pass Every Test
Climb That Mountain, You Will Impress
There Is No Doubt, You Are The Best
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Flying Colours, Pass Every Test
The Past Is Gone, Your Lessons Learned
There Is No Doubt, You Are The Best
Aiming For Heaven, Path Is Turned
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Beautiful piece. Well done.
So important and inspirational!
This was so uplifting Mike! I loved your poem!
Aim for the stars β¨π