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A Rave in a Grave

Lonzoโ€™s dark poetry challenge 2/2. 47 words.

By Chloe GilholyPublished 2 years ago โ€ข 1 min read
A Rave in a Grave
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๐Ÿ’€

Corrupt preachers have

chanelled Mother Earthโ€™s wrath

on Halloween night

๐Ÿ’€

A rave in a grave

a pint of iced organ splash

with salted eyeballs

๐Ÿ’€

Within starvation

Consume spider sandwiches

For carbs and protein

๐Ÿ’€

Is it that scary

when you realise all this time

the evil oneโ€™s you?

๐Ÿ’€

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Chloe Gilholy

I live in Oxfordshire, England. I used to write a lot of fan fiction and mainly just write poetry now. I've been to over 20 countries and written many books. I'm currently working on a horror story called Heavenly Seas.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  • Test2 years ago

    Oooooo!! This was such a great poem for the spooky season! I agree with Dharrsheena, that last line was something else!! Great work Chloe!

  • Oooo, that last stanza! That was so brilliant! Loved your poem!

  • Novel Allen2 years ago

    This was so great, made me hoot out loud. Devil woman strikes again.

  • Manisha Dhalani2 years ago

    Oh, that ending! Good one.

  • A Rave in the Grave ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ‚๐Ÿ“๐Ÿ˜‰โœŒ๏ธNice jobโ—

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