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Red, gold takes the stage
‘Till Winters breath knocks them down
Dreams fall to the earth
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Sean A.
A happy guy that tends to write a little cynically. Just my way of dealing with the world outside my joyous little bubble.
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I like "dreams fall to earth"--so true about the temporal nature of beauty. Excellent Haiku.
Another stunner!!! -Dreams fall to earth- is the perfect ending!
Delightful Hailku!🤩Nasty Winter, knocking my favourite colour & it’s friend gold down!😳
Lovely, Shaun. Perfect entry
Simply beautiful. I love the metaphor of dreams for leaves.
Oooh yes! Autumn feels wrapped up in this. Sometimes what falls away is only making room for what’s meant to grow next. 🌱
🍂This is perfect for this challenge.
Nicely done, Shaun!
I love this! Dark and beautiful, like an autumn night.
Lovely choice of imagery. My heart feels warm looking at the sun through the trees. I love what colour we see before winters breath comes. But then you left us with exactly what that would entail. Fantastic job here Sean. 🤗❤️👌🏾
Ooooh. I am loving everyone's subtle takes on the same singular event - of leaves falling. This was stunning, Shaun. I love the stage setting and winter's breath - it not needing much to knock those red and browned leaves down. And that last line just lands beautifully. You can't see, but this grumpy Scot is applauding you.