an impossible dream
For the Love in 50 Words challenge
time improbably reversing
a mother’s love rekindles
Mary holding our grand babe in wonderment
filling my eyes with tears
like an impossible dream
the years melting away
in my precious wife’s expression
the love shining in her eyes
reviving a vision of her holding
our own babes to her heart
About the Creator
John Cox
Twisted writer of mind bending tales. I never met a myth I didn't love or a subject that I couldn't twist out of joint. I have a little something for almost everyone here. Cept AI. Ain't got none of that.
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A Letter to the Firestarter
Dear Firestarter, We can all see you, we've been watching you since you began. In case you didn't know we were here before you and we will be here after. We witnessed your rise, your setbacks, your guilt and your lies. We witnessed you start the fire.
By Donny Foley4 days ago in Poets
~ Fired ~
— Ai Intrusion ~ Are you Next ~ Is Ai Evolution after your job? — Few workplaces haven't been affected. Ai is in supermarkets, at doctors' offices, and even monitoring farms. I just can't think of anything this machine is not getting into, can you? For instance: Education ~ Law and Tech jobs will one day have a major influence or be taken over by these inanimate machines, with accuracy and vigor. From mechanics' diagnoses to a wide variety of everyday jobs, including fast food workers, with this input having the ability to cut their unnecessary work hours. I'm certain all of us have been touched by this with our short stories and colorful headings, have you? Even comments are very questionable 'Non-Robot' insertions.
By Jay Kantor2 days ago in Journal
Comments (27)
So beautiful—and the radiance of that smile! Pure joy ♥️
Aweee awesome 😍 beautiful feeling 🥰
Heartfelt and emotional!
This is so beautiful that it makes me want to cry...truly
Well-wrought! Memories like these are life's poetry, my friend. Bless you and yours!
Aww this is so sweet!
What a beautiful poem. and photos - An amazing love poem that truly emphasis what it is like to be a mother. Well Done John!!
Delightful poem & photos… the photos are remarkably similar. What a blessing family can be 😍.✅
Beautiful photos and poem. A true love poem showing the wonder of the babies around again, bringing the joy of watching her with them! Great entry.
Oh, this is so special, John! I absolutely love it! Such a beautiful poem book-ended with two amazing photos!
Oh, goodness, but you made me cry. Tell me how any parent could not read that and find the mist of tears. Loved the emotion your poem packed in so few words so much! The wonderful pictures contribute so much (adorable grandbaby).
Awww, your photos and poem are so sweet! Loved them so much!
Preciously beautiful, John. Life tends to repeat itself or as you so poetically put it, “time improbably reversing.” It’s so wonderful when we’re able to rekindle an emotion from many decades ago. Exceptional work, John.
When you are living the good life good things like above occur. Good job.
'the years melting away' It takes years of living to fully understand this line... I understand.
Simple and beautiful! ☺
Aww this is so lovely ❤️❤️❤️
This is beautiful, and so heartwarming. Well done.
Beautifully captures the timeless bond of love across generations, evoking deep emotion and nostalgia.
So beautiful, John! Babies give us so much love.
This is so sweet. The whole thing feels super warm, like it’s a moment frozen in time. It’s so beautiful and real.
What a wonderfully sweet and emotional poem. You continually inspire us, tenderly touching our hearts with realest parts of life
Such a beautiful reflection on time and love—it's like a heartwarming snapshot of a timeless bond. Really moving!
So, so beautiful, John!! Love across the years, eloquently reflected upon - one of my favorites I've seen for the challenge. :)
This is just beautiful, sir. Given both our loves of diving into the darkest recesses of being human, I still marvel that we can produce such vividly beautiful work.I hope this is included in the winner's list, because the picture is lovely and the sheer joy on both bairn and Mary's faces is fully evident. Can see why you took inspiration and in such a eloquent and heartfelt manner. Well done, sir!