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AS THE DAY ENDS

just one more hour

By Margaret BrennanPublished about 16 hours ago 1 min read
AS THE DAY ENDS
Photo by Vivek Doshi on Unsplash

As the sun begins to gently sink into the horizon,

Valentine's day is coming to an end.

I ease my weary body on the couch and wonder

Why your lack of attention I still defend.

*

There were no fragrant flowers delivered,

No card that I could read.

Just the emptiness I feel

Like a wayward, unattended seed.

*

Excuses always made, you're busy, or forgot.

But is it too much to ask

For a simple "Happy Valentine's Day" mention.

It's not a difficult task.

*

Now the sun has finally set,

The darkness fills the sky.

Once again, I've slipped your mind,

As the tears now slip from my eyes.

*

Oh well, there's always next year.

heartbreak

About the Creator

Margaret Brennan

I am a 78-year old grandmother who loves to write, fish, and grab my camera to capture the beautiful scenery I see around me.

My husband and I found our paradise in Punta Gorda Florida where the weather always keeps us guessing.

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  • Edward Swaffordabout 5 hours ago

    Melancholic and reflective, this is beautiful, Margaret!!

  • Mark Grahamabout 15 hours ago

    Happy Valentine's Day! Other than my sister there was only one other that said this to me for I did post a Happy Valentine's Day Post to all friends and family and only 2 responded.

  • Mariann Carrollabout 16 hours ago

    Happy Valentine's Day, Margaret! 🥰I hope I am not too late!

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