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Asphyxiation

An acrostic poem

By Laura PruettPublished 2 years ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read

Ever since the day I saw you

Come around the corner in the store

Like a sudden breeze, like the part of me

I never knew I had; even as our eyes met that fateful day,

Penetrating the depths of our souls in

Surprised wonder, I’ve been holding my breath, awaiting this endless

Eclipse

Author's Note: I wrote this story as a contest entry for the ECLIPSE Acrostics contest. I hope you enjoyed the read. I'd love to hear what you think, so please feel free to leave a comment, click the heart, and subscribe!

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About the Creator

Laura Pruett

Laura Pruett, author of The Dwarves Of Dimmerdown and others.

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