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Banned Drones

NJ Controversy - haiku 2

By Andrea Corwin Published about a year ago 1 min read

ban set high in sky

drones are not allowed to fly

New Jersey goodbye

🚥 🚥 🚥

the first one is here:

The New Jersey drones are causing quite a controversy. After I wrote the Warning? haiku above, now there are warnings to the culprits that they WILL shoot them down (which was my suggestion in the first haiku - if you want to know who is behind it, shoot it down, and you. will know).

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  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    As your regular fan I too liked this!

  • Kodahabout a year ago

    I love the use of '🚥 🚥 🚥' at the end hints control, rules and boundaries! Love this! 💌

  • Ignited Mindsabout a year ago

    Great, I like your writing style

  • Rowan Finley about a year ago

    This is going to continue to be a big concern worldwide I’m afraid.

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    Politics in haiku. I like it.

  • Shirley Belkabout a year ago

    I have a feeling had the drones flown over somewhere south of the Mason-Dixon line instead of NJ, we would have known who was flying them...just like your story said....these folks around here are always "locked and loaded."

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Wow, this was excellent work on what went on in Heiku!!!

  • Oooo, the plot thickens. Let's see what happens next

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    It all depends to me on what the drones are for and capable of doing. Good job.

  • Kamal Punabout a year ago

    Hey can you collaborate with me

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