Behold
A creation story
Surrendered heart
with soul to follow
Diffusion within divine fluid
even love dare not reveal
Description defied by ecstasy
the artist's palette falls
flute and lyre present silence
as final tribute
for passion’s tender shoots
to leaf to flower to fruits
The burst within of sweetness seeds
No questions to ask
No rites to perform
As the moon draws water
water craves moon
Each thirst for original union
of ancient beginnings
Fear never lived there
Faith always flourished
No help required
Now
expanse of energies without parallel
strip flesh of its layers
fuse light and life to love
then fashions new bodies
Breathes into them beauty
Delivers them to desire
A peace to birth new pleasures
in sight of heights that rise again
and again
and again
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Comments (19)
Wow! You were in the zone when you wrote this one. I feel a bit more evolved after reading it. Congrats, Dani!
Amazing poem!
A mesmerizing journey through the depths of passion, transcending fear, where divine union births endless beauty and boundless energy.
My friend, I will read this poem again and again and again! Absolutely, yes!!! A thousand times!!!! Every line became more and more beautiful. So well done and such a well deserved top story! Wow. Incredible. Thanks for sharing this piece of art with all of us.
awesome work, congrats on Top Story.
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Lingeringly beautiful poem. Congratulations on the Top Story recognition, too!
Congrats on Top Story! Well deserved for such a fluidly woven piece!
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Beautiful
The poem explores spiritual unity through mystical imagery, portraying a journey of surrender and transformation. It depicts the evolution from desire to divine connection, using natural metaphors like the moon and water to illustrate cyclical harmony. The final lines emphasize an ongoing rebirth, where light and love continually reshape existence.
This story is absolutely fantastic!
This is incredibly beautiful. Congrats on the TS.
This is truly breathtaking! I love, love LOVE your gorgeous creation words here. 🥹❤️ Stunning work!
The burst within of sweetness seeds - I lingered on this beautiful line!
"As the moon draws water water craves moon" Those were my favourite lines! Loved your poem so much!
The flow is immaculate! Beautiful piece of poetry.
SSS, this is brilliant and inspirational!!!💕❤️❤️
This is worth every second of the effort you put into it. Absolutely beautiful.