I can’t stop thinking about you
I yearn for you when we’re apart
Your absence leaves me empty
I fantasize to pass the time
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The flutter of anticipation stirs
When I know you’re on your way
I am spellbound upon first sight
I ache to get closer
❤️🔥
I inhale your inviting scent
Feel your heat on my face
Being near you builds the anticipation
I summon you to join me
❤️🔥
The first taste makes my mouth water
You’re so hot on my tongue
I can’t catch my breath
The essence of heaven in my throat
❤️🔥
Your intensity brings tears to my eyes
Finally, I swallow and take you inside me
The heat soothes and comforts
I love you, kung pao chicken
❤️🔥
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This is my first acrostic poem. Although I am originally from Montana, I have lived in California for many years. I find comfort in the sights, sounds, and sensations of the beach. Now that I am here, I can’t imagine living any other way. When the sun makes its voyage each day from east to west, I know I am witnessing the divine journey of the sun god, and all the challenges he must overcome to complete his daily quest.
By Dawn Salois3 years ago in Poets
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Whoa, that came out of left field! Lol! I never saw it coming! Finally a plot twist which managed to hit me in the face. Loved your poem!
That twist at the end was masterful and hilarious. I think we can all relate to an unconditional love for food. Well done!
Hahaha, that ending! Love it.
Superb absolutely superb!!! Loving the sweet comfortable twist at the end!!!💖💕
Lol. I love this. Well done.
Hahaha was not expecting that last line. Brilliant.
That was fantastic! Loved the humor at then end :)
I love it. I knew a punchline was coming... Just did not expect that punchline. Good work.
I was breathless while reading it, the sexuality of the longing waiting . Bravo 👏