💖BUBBLE GUM
Taking Metiers From Fantastic to, Actually Having the Intention to Stick...
STICKY LOVE 💕
- You Jammed my concentration
To the Beat
Of your DRUM 🥁...
I Became Plagued by your manners.
BUBBLE GUM
is so Clingy...
I Rejoinder to your vibes that represent me.
Like standing yielded in a maze, I'm with you.
💖
Your Love welcomed me, with an open Heart.🫧
Like BUBBLE GUM
-My Sweet Devotion, affixing to your compassion.
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Comments (16)
Very good perfect metaphor
Sweet poem, Lonzo!
😍 Loved
Great poem. The concept of love and bubble gum, how sweet. xoxo
so very sweet Lonzo!
Not me thanking if love was a bubble gum, I'd chew it and spit it out 🤣🤣🤣 Loved your poem!
"Stuck on you, got this feelin' down deep in my heart that I just can't lose...." Just remember, if you decide to grow facial hair it's tough to get out when it pops, lol.
This was super sweet.
Cute!
Supercute!!!!
Sweet, sweet, sweet!!! Loved it!!!♥️♥️💕
Excellent. Very fun and sweet.
Sticky sweet. Well done
Cute and bubbly! 💯
Great beat: full of color warmth and openness.
“My Sweet Devotion, was Sticking to your compassion.“ 😍😍😍😍 I love that!!