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Butterfly Hug

On restraint, dignity, and learning how to hold without touching

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 13 days ago β€’ 1 min read
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It's International Hugging Day today...and time to make loved ones feel wanted with a hug.

But some hugs are better felt than given. Especially with someone who needs space to hug themselves.

Let's hug the right way.

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Flutters

Wings wrap around

An elderly comrade

Who pushes them back with new force

And shields

ItΒ  sees its old friend with clear eyes

Folds back its too-large wings

Flutters,no fold

Wings lost

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It lands

Near its frail comrade

Waits, flutters by his side

For him to unfurl his hurt wings

Himself.

Then, steps backwards and dances off

With wings open, waiting

To hold its friend

With space.

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For Mikeydred's January Challenge

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Aarsh Malik12 days ago

    A hug felt, not forced.. this resonates deeply. The wings make the restraint feel tender and alive.

  • Cadma13 days ago

    I love this so much

  • Pamela Williams13 days ago

    This is beautiful. I appreciate the idea of feeling the hugs of those who aren't physically present. Perhaps even hugs can be felt from Heaven. Imagine the possibilities.

  • Sandy Gillman13 days ago

    A beautiful reminder that love can be patient and spacious.

  • Lana V Lynx13 days ago

    So pensive, Michelle, reminded me of the "Past Lives" movie.

  • A beautiful piece, thankyou for sharing, I love butterflies xx

  • Paul Stewart13 days ago

    Another thoughtful and wise piece. Love this, Michelle

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