
I am making eye contact with-
Fire held in a handmade house-
Set on a table-
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Aromas of freshly cut coconuts-
Or of rainforests after a shower from the sky-
Or of peach cobbler out the oven of a Southern kitchen-
Swooping through an entire room-
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Candle you are the disperser of-
The warmest memories, feelings, and dreams-
Your solid wax gives in to science-
The flame liquifying your contents-
Sending the senses across continents-
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Candle-
I have always loved you-
But never lit you-
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My father's fear kept the lighter out of my hand-
The matches buried in a drawer-
And you contained to the aisle of home goods-
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Now at the head of my own table-
You can blaze in all your glory
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Comments (2)
I like this! You gave the sense of the candle- and the fear of lighting it- very well
This was sooooo aromatic! Such a wonder ode!