Christmas Eve
For the Holiday Reflections in Verse challenge
Way back when my cheeks were chubby and pink,
magic had power and Christmas looked white,
I liked to look for the first star to wink.
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Glued to the window, I strived not to blink
while scanning the evening still far too bright,
way back when my cheeks were chubby and pink.
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Early darkness would spread like spilled black ink,
the afternoon giving way to the night.
I liked to look for the first star to wink.
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On Christmas Eve, the evening sky’s first blink
meant the supper could start the night’s delight
way back when my cheeks were chubby and pink.
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Twelve dishes (if you count the fizzy drink)
were Tradition, as was the snowball fight.
I liked to look for the first star to wink.
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After that, gifts were opened and glasses clinked,
our house smelled of spices, the tree shone bright.
Way back when my cheeks were chubby and pink,
I liked to look for the first star to wink.
About the Creator
Katarzyna Popiel
A translator, a writer. Two languages to reconcile, two countries called home.
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Comments (9)
I have never succeeded in writing a poem in this form. Maybe 2025 will be the year I manage it! Really impressed by this. I love the lines you chose to repeat.
Childhood can be wonder and joy. Memories of such a time!😊💕
12 dish dinner, Ukrainian? This is such a lovely poem that brought me back to my childhood Christmas's we shared with family and friends. A piece of me felt so happy reading this.
Festively nostalgic, love it.
Oh, this is so nostalgically lovely. Childhood days of innocence. Why do we outgrow the wonder.
Love your villanelle, Katarzyna! Great repeating lines!
I can feel the vibe of love and Christmas ✨❤
Lovely, Katarzyna. Like a warm blanket.
How lovely and nostalgic :)