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City Rain

A poem

By Isla GriswaldPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - July 2024
City Rain
Photo by Andre Benz on Unsplash

Hard raindrops splattered on my face.

Squelch, squelch went my soggy shoes.

What horrendously bad luck.

I keep walking, my head down,

letting myself melt into the shadowy colors

of the city's metal and concrete.

Ugh. I walked faster, not bothering to avoid

the puddles on the uneven sidewalk now.

The only escape on my left was a shady alleyway

cluttered with refuse and infested

with nasty little bugs and rodents.

On my right, the street where cars

were barrelling past much faster

than was safe in this weather.

I was too self-conscious to break into a run.

Some other unfortunate soul slunk out of a doorway,

head hung, no hope of staying clean or dry.

Dirt and trash mixed with the deluge,

and soon the thick brown sludge was sloshing everywhere.

What a nasty day to be outside,

nature disregarded and desecrated

in the name of steel and glass.

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Isla Griswald

I am, and always have been, obsessed with names, swords, and everything relating to ancient Greece and Rome.

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  • Sanjay Upadhyay2 years ago

    congrats on the TS

  • Blessing Ezuoke 2 years ago

    Nice work

  • Grz Colm2 years ago

    ‘Dryly’ amusing with all that fun imagery! Nice work on your top story Isla.

  • Lamar Wiggins2 years ago

    Excellent work!!!

  • BrendaCurry2 years ago

    cool story

  • Well done and congratulations.

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Congrats on the TS.

  • Rachel Robbins2 years ago

    Congratulations!

  • Moe Radosevich2 years ago

    Fantastic, and many congrats on your Top Story 😊😊👍👍

  • Cindy Calder2 years ago

    Such descriptive imagery! Congratulations on Top Story.

  • Test2 years ago

    Beautiful poem.

  • Oh my, that indeed was nasty. Loved your poem

  • ReadShakurr2 years ago

    Enjoyed your poem ,brilliant choice of words and rhythms

  • Rasma Raisters2 years ago

    Ahh. you paint a wonderful poetic portrait of rain coming down in a city any city but particularly in my hometown NYC. Despite it all I do miss this city,

  • Sometimes it feels like weird but nature is amazing. Liked your work.

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