In the blackest sky
Unblinkered time perceives more
Than the naked eye.
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It is a fact that the truth often remains hidden from the naked eye. The dark image of the sky adds a sense of mystery and makes us think about the unknown. Very nice work!
That's a nice thought
Ooo very thought provoking and wait did you take that picture?
Cracking entry! Good luck 😁
Unblinkered is a such a great word😄 Almost like how without light, more can be seen/revealed!
Rarely do I feel the need to look up a word. Unblinkered got me. Re-read and it was excellent. Wonderful work.
Outstanding work!!
Oh!!! This is so clever Hannah because a lot of people are missing the lights unless they use their phones!! So so so smartly penned!!
Very well done, this prompted pause and pondering
Mindful piece
well written
The last line topped it all off! Love it 💌
So good
love this poem
Omgggg yessss, that's sooo true!
These lines are a beautiful portrayal of depth and emotional experience. Feeling the stillness and vastness of time in the darkest sky is like sensing the slow passage of time in life's most difficult moments. To witness every moment with greater intensity than even with naked eyes, without blinking, is a symbol that connects us to the mysteries of existence and the struggles within us. This poem sheds light on those fragile moments of life where every second seems eternal. Wonderful! ✨🌌🕰️
"unblinkered time" - great words. Great haiku.
Delightful 💖
Love the expression unblinkered time for a Time lapse photo!
Excellent.
Such a cool verse, Hannah!
True and the photo fits
beautiful, both your words and the pic.