Constellation Apple Trees
Stanza I: a love poem about dancing in the ✨stars✨.
I remember love and light,
the way it came to me that night -
as we were dancing by the sunset
in my dreams.
And all the way to Jupiter,
glowing brightly in the bluest blur,
stars flew all around us -
and flowing steadily, they gleamed.
As you spun and dipped me through
the galaxies,
picking fruit from constellation
apple trees,
I'll remember this night
living on forever
in my dreams. 💫
-Gina C. 🧚♀️✨
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I haven't quite decided if this poem is finished or if I want to continue with more stanzas. However, my poems take me quite a while to write and I've therefore decided to start posting them - stanza by stanza - as I finish them. :) I really hope you enjoyed this love poem. 🥰 Please let me know what you think! ❤️
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About the Creator
Gina C.
Poet | Author | Architect of Worlds
Sowing stories rooted in culture, origin, metamorphosis, resilience, language & love via fantasy, myth, magical realism & botanical prose
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Comments (10)
Beautiful pair of a photo and poem and gorgeous couple as the subject of both!
This is so beautiful and such a special piece. 💗 Gorgeous!
Lovely, absolutely lovely!!!
Your words conjure the fleeting magic of love and it’s lasting effects. Great work!
This is a great poem. I think it is perfect at its current length, but if the inspiration strikes, then it can also be a longer piece.
Awww, this was so sweet and wonderful! I loved it!
I think this is perfect as is. Well done.
Lovely words
Beautifully written... Lovely poem... Great job!!!
This was such a lovely poem with gorgeous language. Can't wait to read the next stanza if you continue on with it :) Great work!