You left me in a world,
Where I couldn't defend myself,
Where I was hopeless and lost,
Where I relied on you,
Where I needed you,
To cope,
With my fears,
All these years,
Scared of losing you,
Thinking of a world where it was just us,
Against everyone else,
Like no one else mattered,
But us,
For once,
But where are you now,
Where did you go,
Why did you leave me,
Outside I'm laughing,
Inside I'm crying,
Was I lying to you,
When I said I was trying,
Or was I afraid to help you,
Could of I have done more to save you?
About the Creator
Kodah
- Storyteller, Love/Romance, Dark, Surrealism, Psychological, Nature, Mythical, Whimsical
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Comments (4)
Beautiful poem!
This sadly rings particular true for me too! A fine poem! And a brilliant image. Did you draw it? ๐๐
This was so emotional and relatable as well. Loved your poem!
You done perfectly in life. Stay strong stay Motivated stay happy