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Dedicated/Medicated

Inner turmoil dosage confliction

By BrenPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

i was medicated not dedicated

it assisted to loosen the grip

and the looser the grip was assisted

the better the fucking trip

i wasn’t fucking sober

and i wasn’t fucking high

i wasn’t about to live my life

but i wasn’t going to die

i wasn’t going to roll over

as i waited to conform

i was about to do something foolish

but not stray too far from the norm

i was up that famous creek

a faded doctrine was my paddle

your outrageous feigned offense

was another hurdle yet to straddle

it’s not the tedium of the medium

it’s the clause within their laws

it’s my dedication to the medication

it’s not about winning and not about scores

it’s the silent voice and lack of choice

girls and boys pure white noise

schemes and dreams plots and plans

one hundred thousand different scams

the weirdness elective the process selective

blunt tool word play speculation hearsay

cheap illusions tired conclusions

worn out torn out fattened delusions

synthetic simulations genuine imitations

obscene initiations strategic limitations

the voices of scandal whisper softly

social commentary

About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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