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Freedom Freedom

An Acrostic Sonnet

By Patrick M. OhanaPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Photo by Abhishek Koli on Unsplash

Far away within a circumcised brain

Regimented by unsanctified words

Endured an idea with ball and chain

Enveloped in less than half-truths and thirds

Death was circling like a flock of vultures

Open to interpretation yet pure

Messing up left and right within cultures

Fencing in too many souls as a cure

Release us from our primitive bondage

Entertain us with papier-mâché bombs

Earth still contains reasons for a sondage

Depicting who we were before our qualms

O freedom thou art a traitor feeling

Myriads died for you often kneeling

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Dedicated to freedom to feel free in the middle of a storm.

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Jon Batiste - Freedom

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About the Creator

Patrick M. Ohana

A medical writer who reads and writes fiction and some nonfiction, although the latter may appear at times like the former. Most of my pieces (over 2,200) are or will be available on Shakespeare's Shoes.

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