Have You Ever Seen a Motionless Hummingbird?
a poem
Pretty soon our hummingbird friends will make their long journey south. I've been thinking of the hummingbird who made herself at home in my garden this summer. This poem is one I wrote about the first time I was able to sit out in the garden and watch her at rest. It is in the form of a collection of minisons, or minimal sonnets, and was published by Kind Over Matter in July.
secret hideaway
drinking ice tea
heat shrivels me
spying whir-bird
sipping nectars
sees me watching
forever hoverer
rests on ivy vine
wings fall still
caught drowsing
a miracle moment
once in a lifetime
witnessed magic
maybe a daydream
or maybe it's real
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About the Creator
Caitlin Gemmell
Caitlin Gemmell is a poet and aspiring novelist living in a woodland in upstate New York. You can connect with her on Instagram @icapturethestory and on Substack where she writes a weekly newsletter, Ink-Stained Compass.


Comments (1)
i love this poem