Hawaiian Nights
A manifestation poem seeing myself in Hawaii even though I have never been there before
I see the land where the ocean sings
where the palm trees sway and sunlight clings.
I see myself in Hawaii's embrace,
a soft, tranquil sandy beach, a cherished place.
The waves whisper my name to the shore,
In every breeze, I feel I'm there.
The golden sand beneath my feet,
A sacred ground where my heart meets.
I see a sunset painting the sky with hues
and endless views of a long-stretched beach.
I see the lush green valley where I walk
and my husband's laughter flows
a melody only the island knows.
I see rainbows arch across the sky
a promise made, you and I.
In every flower
every fragrant, wallowing in the breeze
I see Hawaii's calming waves
a special place for you and me.
I see the stars above, they softly gleam
guiding us through this shared dream.
I see the night, under the moon's soft light
I hold you close, my heart's delight.
Hawaiian nights, warm and still
with you my love they always will.
In this paradise, we find our way
for many more years, we will see today.
And so I manifest our sacred place
when we land
in Hawaii's arms
you and I
sitting together
watching the blue sea swaying
towards us,
our love still pure,
for all to see.
Also published on Medium.com
About the Creator
Denise Larkin
A writer with a BA in Arts & Humanities (specialism Creative Writing), studying for an MA in Creative Writing, writes poetry and fictional short stories. The author of Time to Run, The Island of Love, Darkness, and The Non-Human.
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Outstanding
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions

Comments (4)
You need to go. It is a wonderful place and your words will be written anew on experiencing it.
Becalming. Nice job!
The poem is full of a blissful atmosphere, communion with nature, and passionate, romantic love attributions to fantasy and the urge for ideal escape. Don't give up dreaming and hope. Visualize more often and be happy.
This was so wonderful. Hope this manifests for you!