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Hawaiian Nights

A manifestation poem seeing myself in Hawaii even though I have never been there before

By Denise LarkinPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Hawaiian Nights
Photo by Karsten Winegeart on Unsplash

I see the land where the ocean sings

where the palm trees sway and sunlight clings.

I see myself in Hawaii's embrace,

a soft, tranquil sandy beach, a cherished place.

By Peter Vanosdall on Unsplash

The waves whisper my name to the shore,

In every breeze, I feel I'm there.

The golden sand beneath my feet,

A sacred ground where my heart meets.

By Emily Shirron on Unsplash

I see a sunset painting the sky with hues

and endless views of a long-stretched beach.

I see the lush green valley where I walk

and my husband's laughter flows

a melody only the island knows.

By Adrian Benea on Unsplash

I see rainbows arch across the sky

a promise made, you and I.

In every flower

every fragrant, wallowing in the breeze

I see Hawaii's calming waves

a special place for you and me.

I see the stars above, they softly gleam

guiding us through this shared dream.

I see the night, under the moon's soft light

I hold you close, my heart's delight.

By Danie Franco on Unsplash

Hawaiian nights, warm and still

with you my love they always will.

In this paradise, we find our way

for many more years, we will see today.

And so I manifest our sacred place

when we land

in Hawaii's arms

you and I

sitting together

watching the blue sea swaying 

towards us, 

our love still pure, 

for all to see.

Also published on Medium.com

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About the Creator

Denise Larkin

A writer with a BA in Arts & Humanities (specialism Creative Writing), studying for an MA in Creative Writing, writes poetry and fictional short stories. The author of Time to Run, The Island of Love, Darkness, and The Non-Human.

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  • Rachel Deemingabout a year ago

    You need to go. It is a wonderful place and your words will be written anew on experiencing it.

  • Rachel Steinmetzabout a year ago

    Becalming. Nice job!

  • Testabout a year ago

    The poem is full of a blissful atmosphere, communion with nature, and passionate, romantic love attributions to fantasy and the urge for ideal escape. Don't give up dreaming and hope. Visualize more often and be happy.

  • This was so wonderful. Hope this manifests for you!

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