Heavenly Bodies
A SenryΕ« (ε·ζ³) For The Vocal Sky-Ku Challenge
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I promise this is my final entry.
A SenryΕ« (ε·ζ³) For The Vocal Sky-Ku Challenge
The music is "Bright Phoebus" by Lal and Mike Waterson
Heavenly Bodies
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Bright Phoebus Shining
Selene Silver, Twinkling Stars
Heavenly Bodies
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Our Song
Evening has given way to night. Gently, I settle next to you on the comfortable, old love seat and reach for your hand. You snatch it away, again. It cuts me to the quick, but I hide the pain, understanding that the reaction is but part of your demented state. Since the accident, your presence here in our cozy home has been clouded by a haze I can't see. Nevertheless, I feel the frigidity of your expressions and it serves as an excruciating reminder of the immeasurable distance between us.
By Dana Crandell2 days ago in Fiction
Comments (10)
Beautiful poem. I find writing Sky-ku very addicting lol.
such a lovely piece, you just one of the best writers
Great choice of words.
Beautiful words, Mike!
Beautifully written.
This is a nice way to say good night as the night sky twinkles. Good work.
Nice. Although the use of 'twinkling' reminded me of a debate about how accents can play a role in this type of poetry. I'd read it as three syllables (twin-kul-ing), but a different accent would have it as two (twin-kling). I wonder if Japanese runs into similar issues?
Beautiful!
This was sooooo wonderful Mike. I'm working on my Haiku. Advance apologies if it's a Senryu π
This is so magical! Well done! :)