Hey Universe
Can You Do Something for Me?...
Hey Universe,
So much of the Day,
I want to fade away...
But I can't currently
because
Of the Time.
In my mind,
I say that I won’t
Endure anything personal Today.
I write in my journal and I Must convey...
I've tried so Hard,
But So Much of The Day
I want to fade away...
Hey Universe,
Can you do
Something for me?...
Bring into the world
The things I need,
To keep my Sanity...
Deliver a large portion of
The Happinesses…
Sell me a timepiece,
So that I know when it's
Time to be free...
When the wind taps me on the shoulder,
I'll know it's time to be made over...
Hey universe,
Guide me toward the river...
So that I may Replenish my essence...
Underneath the Crystals of water, maybe I'll find a treasure...
From the trees may I learn to leave,
Old things behind, while preparing to Blossom again!
I'll be like buds from the ground Still I Rise!
Only as the light of the Moon, I won't fear Darkness.
Hey universe,
Help me be as Beautiful as the sky...
Even when it alters from Darkness to light.
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Comments (82)
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Beautiful!
I love this!
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Always love to read what you write and how it makes me feel ❤️
Beautiful, as always!
Inspirational and very well written! Heartaking. I would be very happy if you go read one of my poems
Lovely and inspirational. Wow!
Very good
Absolutely incredible.
Nice
NICE
"Only as the light of the moon, I won't fear darkness" <3 A beautiful poem!
i share a lot of these musings as well. thank you for sharing.
This one was really good.
That last line just outstanding ❤️ Beautiful ♥️ I wish we had that timepiece ❤️
Beautiful, heartfelt and inspiring! Such a great reminder that it never hurts to ask for the things you need as they universe will provide for those who ask! Well written, Lonzo!
Do you know,,your Universe always help you,,just Trust on it then you will overcome all barriers! This poetry well deserve!! Here's one picture i also use to my "curiosity of life" poetry!
Radiantly beautiful.
Excellent words and a deserved Top STory
I love this so much. I felt it in my soul. Thank you for sharing this work with us :)
Another wonderful poem. I'm so glad Tiffany Gordon did a shout out for you on yesterday's Vocal thread. Congratulations on Top Story.
Absolutely beautiful.
That was beautifully written and something I could really connect with. Having down days or tough times and being hopeful but just reaching out and asking for some assistance. Loved this!