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I come to you

Yearning in a Crowd of Lovers

By Naveedkk Published 3 years ago 1 min read
Love that's not

I come to you for the reason that no one has (beloved) other than you.

You stay away from me because you have thousands of lovers like me.

I come to you for the reason that no one has,

Beloved, other than you, the one who surpass.

In your presence, my heart finds solace and peace,

A haven where troubles and worries find release.

But alas, you stay away, distant and apart,

For you have thousands of lovers, a crowded heart.

Each soul yearns for your affection, your sweet embrace,

Bound by desire, caught in love's endless chase.

Yet still, I persist, drawn to your radiant flame,

Knowing that I may never be the one to claim.

For in your realm of passion and allure,

I am but a humble traveler, unsure.

I long for your touch, your whispers in the night,

To bask in your love, to feel your love's might.

But I understand the burden you carry,

Your heart entwined with lovers, ever merry.

Though I may be one among countless others,

In your presence, I find solace, my soul uncovers.

For even if we remain forever apart,

You've ignited a fire within my heart.

So, I come to you, beloved, despite the divide,

Knowing our love may never fully reside.

But in the moments we share, however few,

I find a love that feels eternally true.

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Naveedkk

Every written or spoken word is not necessarily according to the standards of the reader and listener. The speaker is in his own state while the listener is in his own state.

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  • Yuly Yulyan3 years ago

    Reading your poetry feels like sitting with someone who understands the pain

  • Wonderful! Well done!

  • Jarosław3 years ago

    The yearning expressed for the beloved's touch and whispers in the night evokes a sense of intimacy and longing.

  • Kamil3 years ago

    Your words are like a window into the depths of your soul. Your sadness is palpable, but so is your strength in expressing it."

  • Marcel3 years ago

    That was exceptionally well written.

  • Rob Angeli3 years ago

    Very nice!

  • Sensual, Hypnotic, Wonderful! 👏

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