I don't know
A Haiku/ I am not a vocal + member and I needed to do some edits on my Haiku. So I have published this with the same title, so my dear friends if you read this, this is the same Haiku with some edits 🥰
Nut, I've explored you,
Crisp, the new - a nice cover,
Mind, what do you say?
# Probably in a supermarket #
Thanks for reading !!!
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Esala Gunathilake
I am an enthusiastic writer who feel the sense of humanity. Thus, I can write stanzas, short stories, novels, articles and blogs as well. I am a blog contributor for the Ananda College Engineer's Ink student chapter website.
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great
By the way, that's a nice haiku. What type of chocolate do you prefer?
Wow! Best! I love it!
Nice!
Yummy!!!
AW SHUCKS! Please don't make me eat chocolates...So love it, but shouldn't indulge. The only thing keeping me hanging on to Vocal +, is the ability to edit. Love the Haiku.
I wish I loved chocolate but I do enjoy some nuts. I think your mind wants to explore the chocolate bar further 😉.
Makes me wish! I gave up chocolate due to caffeine and the sugar that I was consuming too much of most days! 😞😕
Each word resonates with a sense of curiosity and wonder, amazing job, love it, thank you very much for sharing!
I feel like you're undecided on the nutty bar.
Loved the haiku and the picture. Both are making me hungry. Esala now I demand a nutty-cholocate bar. 🤣🤣
nice and short
this was cute ☺
nice
Amazing
Makes me hungry 😋
The mind will say this is out of this planet 👍
Very sweet and crisp are your chocolate and haiku.
I eat the nuts and the chocolate separately, lol. Loved your Haiku!
Wow! What an outstanding short thriller!
With nuts please 💕💕💕
Hazelnuts are my favorite, especially in dark chocolate.
Crispy...
Yum!!
Sweet and tasty. Lol