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Ice

A poem about freezing

By Silver DauxPublished 27 days ago 1 min read
Top Story - January 2026
Ice
Photo by Maxim Potkin ❄ on Unsplash

Peel the lore from me

Until I am nothing more

Than creaking pine branches

Groaning under the snow,

Waving in the arctic breeze.

.

Go on and dip your fingers

Into the hollows of my trunk

And pull out the shooting stars

Lodged in the gentle bones

Of a ribcage as cold and cruel

As the arctic tundra itself.

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I am a monster covered in snow,

Glittering in the way of some

Benevolent dreamer when I am

The violent tongues lashing out

From the surface of the sun.

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There is fury in my soul.

Prehistoric, wanton, unyielding.

The ice is in my eyes already,

Tightly gathered like spears.

This is a swansong,

A lovely dive into the freeze.

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A.N: Back from a little break! And hopefully my inkwell is refilled and ready to write again :)

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Silver Daux

Shadowed souls, cursed magic, poetry that tangles itself in your soul and yanks out the ugly darkness from within. Maybe there's something broken in me, but it's in you too.

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  • sleepy drafts21 days ago

    Welcome back, SD! Beautiful poem, especially those last lines. Congratulations on TS!

  • Teresa Renton21 days ago

    Such gorgeous imagery! Well done for TS 👏

  • Susan Fourtané 22 days ago

    Lovely poem! Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Aarsh Malik22 days ago

    This swansong into the freeze feels almost alive. Your use of contrast between fury and beauty makes the poem strikingly vivid.

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Harper Lewis24 days ago

    Love this. Congrats on the top story!

  • Nice, and Congratulations on your Top Story 🎊 🎊

  • John Smith24 days ago

    cool, stay strong!

  • K.B. Silver 27 days ago

    Wonderfully written, and welcome back!👏👏❄️❄️

  • Aspen Marie 27 days ago

    I favourited this poem of yours, I love it so much!

  • Heather Hubler27 days ago

    This was fantastic! What imagery! I think they're all my favorite line. I loved the fire and ice elements :)

  • Yayyyy, welcome back! Loved your beautiful poem!

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