If You Let Me
A poem on how to love me
If you let me,
I can tell you how to love me,
but you need to come in close,
even closer.
That's better,
now I can see your eyes cradling the moon,
can you see my eyes?
And the stars in them?
We have to keep looking at each other with lips closed
to let the silence fill in the gap between us
and tell our stories.
So much of my life has been lived in silence
but you let it bloom and be born into something beautiful,
into hope.
See,
without words
without touch
we can already hear and feel each other.
I can feel your hand on mine even now as it lies on your lap,
don't move it just yet,
keep it there,
I want to imagine all the ways it will touch me before it touches me.
So much of my life has been lived in imagining,
and to have you here now...
has it created you or has your existence created the hope in imagining?
I can feel the way your finger tips will caress my cheeks and trickle down my neck,
over my breasts,
and reach for my back to enfold me in your arms.
Can you feel my hands
holding your face,
running through your hair and slipping down the back of your neck to ease your shoulders and pull you into me?
Let us breathe each other in.
And now, we have felt and heard all of what we are
in this quiet.
So take your hand and place it on mine,
let your fingers drop into the space between my fingers
and curl your hand into my hand,
bring your body closer,
lean into me
where our lips can reach each other in a single breath,
and let us close our eyes
and have the moon and the stars disappear.
About the Creator
Katheleen
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Comments (7)
I take consolation in knowing that for the rest of your life, whenever you're not engulfed in an abyss of pain and anguish, it's never far away. You will inevitably find something to be sad about, regardless of any joy you experience, and soon enough you'll end up back in the same or similar abyss of pain and anguish. Have you ever looked into what babies look like in the womb every few weeks? I felt sick. I had no idea. I wish I knew earlier. May God bless you.
Katheleen, I can feel how much of your life has lived in imagining and how meaningful it is for you to finally let someone step into that quiet space with you. Your vulnerability is beautiful.
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Such a beautiful piece.
This is breathtaking. Tender. Intimate and just beautiful. Congrats on Top Story. And on a sublime entry. I've subscribed and can't wait to read more by you.
I love your imagery, especially the eyes cradling the moon 🌙 Beautiful poem, congratulations on the top story!
simply beautiful piece < 3