Kintsugi Sings: Beautiful Pain; Restore Your Joy
A Chant-Royal poem

Pain is unpleasant; we can say
it quells our hope, tugs at our heart
we wish, we hope, oh, how we pray
for solace, change, a brand new start
crying, depressed, makes one feel old
when anguish is the picture's mold
a new perspective waits for you
repurposed joy, which you can do
of damaged art; NO, ouch, this stings
a piece of work, a lesson, too
"beautiful pain," kintsugi sings
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Kintsugi flair asks you to weigh
repair your pain and make it art
think hand-fashioned, a pot of clay
rework the torment; play your part
solemn's suffrage; shall not be sold
a new view awaits, yes, behold
question's query, quick in the queue
fix it, a fact that lies in lieu
now is the time for pulling strings
to try something you never knew
"beautiful pain," Kintsugi sings
~
Discomfort needn't be just grey
abstracts are vital; they are smart
distorted lines, like night and day
share a feeling, some sweet, some tart
can't fix folly; make a new fold
joy scrapes the surface when it's cold
while the hurt is real, yes, it's true
it's how you shape it, or construe
master effort; rework some things
dibble dabble, time's overdue
"beautiful pain," Kintsugi sings
~
Of cracked and broken, if I may
a truthful statement, not a dart
self-sentenced pace; one cannot stay
blood pressure's boiling off the chart
rebuilding pieces with some gold
highights fractures, compels them bold
unhidden cracks give you a clue
strain is lovely; new point of view
in each struggle, a message rings
joy's blessed feeling; gazer's glue
"beautiful pain," Kintsugi sings
~
One falling mug; an outcry: HEY
fumbling the sink work; slip and slarp
reglued and painted, right away
highlighting splittings, no dispart
now fancy markings take their hold
awareness heightened: driven; goaled
joy renewed, a delicious brew
helps more than self when viewed askew
crafting complete, contrasting clings
odd lines and all rebuilt anew
"beautiful pain," Kintsugi sings
~
Pang exposed is an artful woo
accept repairs: a thought to stew
renewed joy; we shall live like kings
gold bonded splittings without rue
"beautiful pain," Kintsugi sings
~
Author's Note: For this challenge, I used the Chant Royal, a 60 line French poem dating to the 14th century.
Here are the format specifics:
- Five 11-line stanzas followed by a 5-line envoy
- 11- line stanza rhyme scheme: ababccddedE
- Final line of each stanza is a refrain
- Envoy rhyme scheme: ddedE
- Line consistency is key; usually 8 or 10 syllables
I wrote of pain, comparing it to something broken (like a mug) while incorporating the Japanese art of Kintsugi (Kintsukurio), which repairs broken pottery by fixing cracks with lacquer blended with powdered gold, silver, or platinum.
Translated to "Golden Joinery," Kintsugi focuses not on hiding the damage, but on highlighting cracks as part of the object's history.
Might we treat pain and all its many facets equally? Might we transform the "broken" feeling into art by affording pain its spot in the sun? Flawed beauty is unique and exquisite, and when embraced, it will restore joy.
Feel all the lines, even the breakings, as imperfections are perfectly fashioned. Joy awaits all who are willing to see!
About the Creator
Marilyn Glover
Poet, writer, & editor, writing to uplift humanity. A Spiritual person who practices Reiki and finds inspiration in nature.
Mother of four, grandmother of two, British American dual citizen living in the States
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Comments (18)
amazing work, really shows how much effort you put in!
Glorious work Marilyn! Good luck with the challenge!
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Back to say congrats!
Nice, Great Job,and Congratulations 🎊 for your Top Story🎊
Love the phrase 'abstracts are vital'. Thank you for the explanation concerning the rhyming scheme as I was wondering and struggling a bit about how to read it. The change in rhyming structure kept throwing me.
This is incredibly done, Marilyn! Girl, you hit it perfectly. Congratulations and good luck, sweetie
I HOPE YOU WIN. WELL DONE AGAIN.
Marilyn, You nailed the form a beautiful way! This one's my new favorite from you. I hope it gets a TS badge, it's definitely the top of what I read all week.
The French are so audacious with their poetry. Another humane, rich, Marilyn-esque offering ^_^.
This sounds wonderful, I wrote something about the custom, forget if I actually posted it. This is lovely.
I enjoyed this a lot. The image of repairing what’s broken instead of hiding it is powerful, and the form gives it such a steady rhythm.
Utterly graceful and beautiful Marilyn!
Whoaaaa, you executed the Chant Royal soooo beautifully! Such a wonderful poem. I loved it!
Wow —that’s quite a constraint. Well done! Great story love the lesson in how to enjoy pain!
Thank you for sharing these amazing words, and surely a Top Story. The longest poem I have done was the rewrite of Poe's "The Raven" but the longest I use regularly is the Sestina. I am bookmarking this
Wow! This is so unique, I loved it. I've always been fascinated by kintsugi flair. Thanks for teaching me about the Chant Royal too!
Mad respect for taking a stab at this super-tightly structured form. I haven’t approached this form just yet. One day . . .