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Last Fall

#1 of 6 : For the falling leaves challenge. I took this particular photo before these challenges were announced. Boy was I relieved when I went to check my phone to see that they weren’t deleted. I also wrote all my haikus before reading others. So now I can run around the haikus garden and see what you’ve all come up with. 😘💕 Ready or not here I come!

By Caitlin CharltonPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
Photo taken by author

Hands that chill. Rustled

Leaves. Paints of colours, wind beats.

Flutter. Dance. Last fall.

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Caitlin Charlton

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  • Imola Tóth5 months ago

    This really makes me feel like November is around the corner.

  • Paul Stewart5 months ago

    Oh that is some nice timing really! Chance opportunity taken to snap up an emodiment of the challenge and your wonderful words. I love the short bursts in the flow. Like whispered, quickly. In my head. As Novel said, there is a strong feeling of the fleeting moment from when the leaves start to fall and are fallen. Stunning and well done on Leaderboard action!

  • Novel Allen5 months ago

    The last line tells of fleeting things and moments. Well said.

  • Tiffany Gordon5 months ago

    Beautiful work CC! ☺️🫶🏾🎉

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your Leaderboard placement! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Raymond G. Taylor5 months ago

    And well done for using your own photography to illustrate. Lovely leafy scene

  • Raymond G. Taylor5 months ago

    Loved the movement and soundscape you weaved into this meaning pack haiku

  • Krysha Thayer5 months ago

    Simply beautiful haiku. Loved it!

  • Mother Combs5 months ago

    Beautifully done, Caitlin <3

  • Mark Graham5 months ago

    Interesting for I could feel the brisk air as I read. Good job.

  • Tim Carmichael5 months ago

    Love the photo and your Haiku!

  • Sean A.5 months ago

    Beautifully done!

  • John Cox5 months ago

    This is quite lovely and evocative of an autumn day, Caitlin. Great entry to the challenge! And I loved the picture you took! Good luck on the challenge!

  • Jess Boyes5 months ago

    Beautiful 🤩

  • The deliberate period stops trace the movement of the leaf effectively, Caitlin.

  • That was so vivid and I could see it so clearly in my head. Loved your Haiku and photo!

  • Test5 months ago

    I love the photo. Powerful haiku. Get 'em!

  • Sandy Gillman5 months ago

    That's an awesome photo to go with your beautiful haiku

  • Great photograph, and love your words

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