Light shatters through a piece of darkness
Almost as if it were needing to remind it
That it was very much still alive.
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Light shines through a moment in time
Showing the life lesson
You are never stuck
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Light breaks through the heart of a dying man
Letting him know
There is nothing to be afraid of.
***
Light reaches out into the forgotten
Pulls us back
And reminds us
We're never alone.
About the Creator
Tressa Rose
On a serious self-discovering, soul-searching journey. Breaking myself out of a stagnant shell and reaching out for my dream of being a writer.
Co-author of Bounce Back- Dreams to Reality: Faith Over Fear
https://a.co/d/98H2vCF
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Outstanding
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Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
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Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
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Comments (7)
Outstanding
This heartfelt and so relatable 💓
Uplifting writing!! ☺️👏
Wow 🤩 this is Great 👍❤️📝
I especially loved the 3rd stanza! You did a wonderful job on this!
Wonderful! You’re certainly not afraid to write a beautiful poem! Rainbows and charm! All the light sees the world, but not at once! Great poem! Fantastic work 💙❤️💜♥️💚🩶🧡🤎🩵🩷💓💕
🥹🥹👏🏼👏🏼 just beautiful. Bravo.