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Limbo

💙+💚 =💘⚡— a Haiku

By Lightning Bolt ⚡Published about a year ago Updated 9 months ago 1 min read
So I just wait?

"Emotionally

"detached"<-— that's what he tells me

"don't know how I feel."

💔 by

___________________Bolt

Original story☝️ by ©️William Markly O'Neal II, 2024 - All rights reserved ⚡

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Lightning Bolt ⚡

Bolt aka Bill, a bizarre bisexual bipolar epileptic⚡🧠⚡ Taco Bell Futurist 🌮🔔

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  • Rowan Finley about a year ago

    This is very relatable!

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    What a way to look at a place known as Limbo for some of us could end up there with decisions to make. Great work.

  • Komalabout a year ago

    Your haiku hits deep but keeps it real—so raw and relatable. That "don’t know how I feel" line? Oof, it says everything while saying almost nothing. 🥺✨ Love how it packs so much into so little!💖

  • Antoni De'Leonabout a year ago

    I feel that. I hear that. Truth in a little Haiku.

  • Lots of fast, hard feelings packed into this haiku. Loved it

  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    Yup, it's hard to associate with someone who's emotionally detached.

  • Emotional detachment sucks, especially when we're deeply attached emotionally to them 🥺 Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️

  • perfect description of being lost

  • Gloria Penelopeabout a year ago

    Super deep! I loved it.

  • Karan w. about a year ago

    Wow! This is so deep and beautifully crafted!

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