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Little Veins

My blood’s stuck

By Marie Cadette Pierre-LouisPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
Little Veins
Photo by Maros Misove on Unsplash

Cozy

The hospital

Frenzy

My hands

Blood from my heart

Not ready to be out

***

Little veins

Dense blood

Adult arms

Microscopic veins

No time for emergency

* **

Tapping slow

Tapping fast

Veins were still invisible

***

Puncture on one place

Puncture on another

Veins were snakes under stones

* **

Stressing out

Freezing

Time for the butterfly

Needle in my arm

* **

Not a drop of blood out

The vein is still under the rock

Right arm is left well-pricked

A chance to the left

* **

The little needle entered my skin

And was pivoted 360º

A little vein was found

My heart then pounded

Thousands of miles per second

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Marie Cadette Pierre-Louis

Hey, it's Marie! I enjoy writing poem and amazing sotries :)

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  • Mariann Carroll3 years ago

    Nursing Poem, very unique 🥰

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