Losing Control
For Paul and John's Three Word Haiku/Senryu Unofficial Challenge
Humiliating,
Undifferentiating,
Overpowering
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Thank you, Paul and John for the inspiration. It's amazing what you can say with three words.
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Julie Lacksonen
Julie has been a music teacher at a public school in Arizona since 1987. She enjoys writing, reading, walking, swimming, and spending time with family.
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After the storm of winter snow there sat a small bear by the name Ted, of course. He loves the snow and likes to roll around in it making all sorts of trails and whatever he has a mind to do. He wondered where all the people are, but in a way, he is hoping that they are all snug in the homes maybe drinking hot chocolate-one of his favorite drinks with mini-marshmallows and eating something homemade for he likes this winter wonderland all to himself to romp and play and maybe even catch some fish down by the river.
By Mark Graham6 days ago in Fiction
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YES Thank you 💪⛹️♀️🏀🥇🏊♀️❤😆🎇🎇🎆🌌🌅⛩️⛩️⛩️⛩️ . . . . BLESSINGS! Power to you! 🛸🌆🌆😆😆😆 . . . . 🎇🎇🎆⛩️ . . ⛩️⛩️ . .
Good one!
The word choice is impeccable. ‘Undifferentiating’ especially lingered in my mind.
Thank you for taking part and if such a biting examination of modern times! Ive subscribed to you, as wasn't already so looking forward to reading more by you! thank you again for taking part!
Fabulous well done 🏆🦋🦋🦋
Great use of three words to highlight our current nightmare! Very impressive! ⚡💙 Bill ⚡
Nicely written ❤️ 👌