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Marble

a new carving on the way

By Kelsey KidderPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - July 2024
Marble
Photo by Vlad Kutepov on Unsplash

Exactly how long does it take to

unravel our intertwined souls

and chisel myself out of

us without breaking my

favorite pieces we

formed together

and become

me once

more

sad poetry

About the Creator

Kelsey Kidder

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Lightning Bolt ⚡about a year ago

    I can totally relate... but not so eloquently. ⚡❤️⚡

  • Christy Munson2 years ago

    You've carved something masterful here. Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Cindy Calder2 years ago

    Absolutely loved this nonet poem. Well done and congratulations on the Top Story.

  • Emily Kitty2 years ago

    Beautiful!💞

  • Congratulations on your Top Story!

  • It is well done, congrats.

  • Gabriel Huizenga2 years ago

    What a marvelous metaphor- beautifully evoked sense of loss! Congrats on the well-earned Top Story! :)

  • ReadShakurr2 years ago

    Just perfect

  • Simon George2 years ago

    Love this. Visual, compelling, and heartfelt

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    This is beautiful. Congrats on the TS.

  • Brilliant work

  • Test2 years ago

    Great piece!

  • Andrea Corwin 2 years ago

    This is a fabulous, beautiful nonet for the challenge! Congrats on TS.🎉⭐️

  • angela hepworth2 years ago

    So so beautiful!

  • Snarky Lisa2 years ago

    Beautiful formatting!

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