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For "The Unnecessary Line" Challenge

By Cristal S.Published about 4 hours ago 1 min read
Photo by cottonbro studio on Pexels

long linen dress

embraces

each and every curve

wrinkled on the hips

thin horizontal line of sweat

seeping through

under breasts

sun-kissed fingers picking

awns and husks

from tangled locks

gaze travelling

across the meadow

mirage

yonder

a slow blink

a turn of head

smile imperceptible

hair stuck to dewy neck

heatwave everlasting

slow hum

unknown melody

no ears close enough to hear

one foot in front of other

toes

on narrow path

through green-stroked golden wheat

withered poppies

weeds

air hangs unmoving

jade irises

freckles

lips ajar

thin chain around a wrist

pearl pendant swaying

His limbs now fertilizer, a clump of peat for the roots.

salted sweat drop

surfaced from the temple

rolls over cheek and chin

dangles

drips

lands

crawls in cradle

seeps into

the long linen dress

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About the Creator

Cristal S.

I've noticed that when I follow the path I enjoy most, I often end up swimming upstream. So here I am, right in the middle of it – writing about it all and more. ♡

@cristals.word.drawer

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  • Lana V Lynxabout 2 hours ago

    Very sensual, Cristal. I could feel those sweat drops on my skin just reading it.

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