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Mystery of the Universe

A Simple Instruction

By C. Rommial ButlerPublished 7 days ago 1 min read
Thomas Cole: The Voyage of Life: Old Age

Feeling good

is not doing good

or being good.

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Though it is a blessed day

When these three things align,

If we pursue only good feelings

We will be sure to find

That we do so at others’ expense.

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Tyrants feel good about accruing power.

Thieves feel good when they steal.

Serial killers feel good when they kill.

Rapists feel good when they violate.

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Addicts feel good when they get their next fix,

Though any of them will tell you:

It never lasts long enough to matter.

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Doing good doesn’t always feel good,

And sometimes those on behalf

Of whom we’ve made the effort

Fail to appreciate it

And might even scorn us.

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Should we cease doing good?

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Sometimes being good

Is not a matter of

Doing anything,

But knowing the right time

To do nothing.

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The good one may be boring

But the good one is never bored.

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This is the real secret

Which reveals itself

To anyone who seeks

To cultivate

A pure heart.

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It’s the most unknown

Unrecognized

Misunderstood

Right out in the open

For everyone to see

Mystery of the Universe.

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The instruction is simple:

Seek and you will find.

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About the Creator

C. Rommial Butler

C. Rommial Butler is a writer, musician and philosopher from Indianapolis, IN. His works can be found online through multiple streaming services and booksellers.

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  • Caitlin Charlton3 days ago

    ❤️❤️ That Tricolon in your opening line was a breath of fresh air. It provided a balanced look at logic that felt light as a feather and made me want to read ahead. I found the Juxtaposition throughout to be incredibly striking. While we would never call a tyrant or a thief "good," those individuals are often cladded in the immoral mud of simply "feeling good."

  • Tori5 days ago

    Nice work! Definitely made me thoughtful upon reading. While not an exact parallel, this reminds of how the squeakiest wheel in the room may not always be the most just. And, it's often worth listening when that 'boring' or quiet person speaks up - they often see and hear the most. Now does that mean either type of person is evil or good based on these qualities? Not necessarily - but, there is some correlation in these types.

  • John Cox5 days ago

    Profound, beautiful and filled with grace. I loved this, Rommi!

  • Sandy Gillman6 days ago

    This one really made me stop and think. Great work!

  • Omgggg, I loveeeeee this! Especially stanzas 1, 7, and 8! They were so deep!

  • Mark Graham6 days ago

    Exactly, seek and you shall find what you need and want just don't forget to be patient. Good job.

  • Sid Aaron Hirji6 days ago

    This is really thought provoking

  • Aspen Marie 7 days ago

    This is better and clearer than any sermon I had to sit through. Well made, dear friend!!

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